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Hot Rod
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Discusses about an insane man's ambition. It's in the formative stages, I will get him rolling soon. Basically, that man is not afraid to do what it takes.

Please help me, my english is not that good, and feedback will be appreciated.
Birdtalon
QUOTE(Rodent @ Mar 30 2010, 07:38 PM) *

Please help me, my english is not that good, and feedback will be appreciated.


LOL!

Your English is better than mine, and I live in the UK.

I love the story too.
Hot Rod
I'd enjoy some feedback.
Hot Rod
Eleven chapters up, and still no feedback?
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THIS IS A CRIME, THEN.


It's quite interesting thus far... I like Ansel's attitude toward things, heh.
The story is definitely winding up to be interesting, I'll keep reading it if you keep updating it.
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