Greetings everyone.
This is my first attempt on making an RP story, still i am working on...let s say the first serious part. The first 2 parts were kind of some introduction and a daily log. Please let me know your honest opinions and if you like the character. Sugestions are welcome to.
Jesse James Log
RNC-Zerstorer links from RP:
First Contact with the Rheinland Military
Have a great day.
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Well...you wanted an honest opinion. As a close friend i might say that it is pritty good for a first RP story. I really like the Daily Log and Story thing that you alternate with. This way it is not boring.
And one more thing...you really seem to be Jesse James.
Keep up with the good work.
And one more thing...you really seem to be Jesse James.
Keep up with the good work.
QUOTE(Oliver M'Cany @ May 7 2010, 05:46 PM) 
Well...you wanted an honest opinion. As a close friend i might say that it is pritty good for a first RP story. I really like the Daily Log and Story thing that you alternate with. This way it is not boring.
And one more thing...you really seem to be Jesse James.
Keep up with the good work.
Oh, thank you very much. I thought that making Daily Log/story it will be much interesting. You know..a thing is to see him talking and a thing is to see him doing something.Thank you again
Love the story, I hope I will see your RP in game also.
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