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Greys diary - mrgrey - 02-01-2010
Greetings all.
I would appretiate feedback if you've read my story.
Cheers.
Greys diary - mrgrey - 02-16-2010
subject1 (Grey): explanation:
The original man, who become Grey later, was born on one of the most well equpped cyber clinics. His whole life was spent in cyber laboratiries, and he received 6 times more cyber modifications than any other living human beeing. Since he was modified in her mother to survive those extreme cyber and biomantic procedures- he could become a really special item in the hands of his creators. Plus his own dna mutation helped him to survive. Without cyberwares he would die in less than a day. But with them...
Unfortunately at his age of 113 (he virtually doesnt age becaus of his special nano-sub systems in his blood), he received a Black Alpha BTL (better-than-life) test-chip what was made for knocking out even the most advanced telepathic talented users, and set up a brutal-psyhopatic peronallity to anyone who puts it in. That superblack BTL burned out his expensive core-computer (a cyber-deck installed to the brain), and damaged some of his sub-sytems.
As he was one of the most effective killing machines if we do not count air-combat and bombs, his owners, the scientists decided to put him into some special projects- till he can be repaired, and till the Chips life time expires after 2 months.
They sent the subject into 3 specially guarded Prison stations. Deleted his full memory core, and filled him up with possible methods of breaking out from any known security systems, plus reinforced him with speciall designed programs what made him able to set up creative methods for the prison-breaks.
He escaped both 3 prison station in less than a day, but after the 3rd escape, he disappeared.
That 3rd station was Vierlande, and because of its superior security sytems, the scientist was not able to watch the systems of the subject from distance.
Because of some reasons Vierlande were completely safe for the scientists, but its specially designed nuclear-radiation level disabled some of the nano-sub sytems of the subject.
He had no problems with breaking out from the pre-cells (while he waited for a labour what could remove his most dangerous cyber wares). No matter that vierlande is one of the best prisons in the menaing of security. Since Rheinland fired its leading cyber- research programmers to replace them with born RHei citizens who are fully loyal to any Kanzler, their sytems was not able to prevent an attack from one of the newest breed of e&m -escape and melee- soliders. He made his way out in less than 10 minutes and more than 20 member of vierlandes crew was killed by that escape.
Rheinland could hide the shameful situation without any problem, so thisway the 7th escape form Vierlande stays in secret forewer. They still can pretend that Vierlande is safe. But the sad truth is that since they fired their junker scientist teams to replace them with Kanzler loyal Rhei-breeds, they simply has no acces for the newest cyber and nano projects. Vierlandes security sytems are superior. AFTER the prisoners are inside of the prison-station. But While they are waiting in the pre-cells, for the 1st nursery to remove their dangerous gears....thats another story.
Grey is out, and he is one of the deadliest criminals. His madness is usually silent, but as soon when he finds some subjects- he starts to torture them immediately. At teh moment no teams has any acces for his systems beside the radio-transreceivers and som important sub-sytems were damaged badly, or deactivated by him. Since he remembers nothing, he is hiding.
Subject 2 (Green):explanation:
Kenneth was a born Molly. He helped his father to garther Gold, and he had a good- rich family. They had everything what they needed. Since the Mollies declared war agansit anyone who tries to steal their gold, the O'Farrel family decided to take part in that. Kenneth bought a fighter and made his way up among the Mollies, till the level of Guard Captein. He was talented pilot, but he started to drink badly, and after the alcohol was too slow way for him, he started to take better-than-life chips.
Slowly his family died out, but he was not care about them. He enjoyed his living inside of his chip-realitys. He sold everything what he got from his family, just to purchase more and even stronger chips. In the end, he had only minus 37 million credits, his old, rusty Gunboat, and his newest black BTL chip.
When he pushed the chip inside of his head, that erased his memories and updated him with the personallity of Green, he become happy again. He forgot all and every pain, and he lived for the new Green-shine among the stars of Dublin.
--->UPDATE of subject2: Green was killed by an incident in Dublin. Two breton gunboats eliminated him, and shooted down his escape pod by battle razors. Total loss on cyberware implants and chips: 17.345.000 sirian credits. Ship wreck re-cycled by known Rhei interests.<---
subject3 (Green)revised: explanation:
Well one stoned week made them create this project. The project was to write an anger-management and translator software for the citizens of planet Primus. The scientist team who tried to use the softwares on -already cyber modificated ape-lings- were not capable to oppose the forces of the stronger males. Several bigger silverback, and apes like general Dhaku who was a know strategist general, and warrior tried to learn the basics of flying with cyber modifications what the ,,kind,, but hated human creatures bring to their planet. No matter that the primusans had a decent fleet of dromedarys and were involved n several smaller zoner paths to the close bases and stations- they were infested by the cyberwares and the influence of the sirians who arrived to the planet to ,,see the monkeys, and hey there is a robo-base close,,. So the general and some other leaders of the army of Primus broke out of the blockade and escaped with a few chips. No sign from them since that day.