Has a kingfisher-y look to the engines and a OSC shuttle tone to the body - I like.
Problem is it's just slightly too featureless on the underside for me and just a little stubby. Although the more I look at it the more I like the eagle similarities, which works for what you're creating here.
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Imho the style itself does not feel fit for a species of craft that are meant to oprerate in fields. I'd say keep the bars to protect windows, but it probably needs a rear pilot cage thing. Also, if you want to give it a bit xeno-esque features, have it seem a bit damaged, a bit torn. Heck, the texture can have a patch of aviation tape just for the fun of it.
Perhaps something with some exposed tubing or mechanics visible. Something sturdier and meant to survive, rather than sleek.
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If I may add my opinion, since it's a fighter, it's cockpit should allow a wider field of view. those bars restrain the view. In asteroid fields where the sensors are jammed, a pilot will need to rely on his eyes. It doesn't matter since nobody uses cockpits but I think keeping the designs plausible and functional is still important.