Conception is a 167 post thread of you talking to yourself, that's been going on since last year. For it to be going that long, have that much on it I thought it must be good. You certainly have put the work in.
The lack of format made it really hard to read, I don't mean BB-code I mean that the layout changes of thread to thread, I was following what appeared to be some sort of internal monologue but then became a conversation then a Captains log. This made things really confusing as there are no mechanics of transition between the three. I wanted to like it and I wanted to be able to read it.
Is there a reason as to why you have chosen to have the layout change so dramatically from post to post and not explained or motivated and change from scene to scene?
The worst enemy of a good plan, is the dream of a perfect one.