Talk:Reapers of Sirius

Edited some spelling and Grammar:

But im confused - there is a logic error in the outline of the story; it initially says that 10 pilots were created to "counteract" (ie fight) a Coalition threat named the "Fallen Angels" - Later, it seems that these 10 pilots and their descendants are the Fallen Angels? That needs to be reworded somehow.. doesn't make sense at the moment.

Laowai

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As for the the wording; I'm not sure, but I'm going to ask in the wiki editors skype chat about this.

--Alex 10:19, 11 February 2010 (MST)

I believe the 10 pilots were codenamed the "Fallen Angels," not the threat. The wording was ambiguous, I think I have made it more clear.

-- Eyvind (Talk) 10:27, 11 February 2010 (MST)

Hmmm. This page definitely needs a synopsis or brief description of the RoS at the top. Also, all the history should go in a history section and the years should be sub headings. --Tazuras 09:44, 7 April 2010 (MDT)