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(10-15-2017, 11:14 PM)Sombra Hookier Wrote: [ -> ]You should link the dickbutt post here as well.

The original was nuked because it was regarded as too ooRP of a joke.
nice!
nice!
(10-15-2017, 11:27 PM)Chuba Wrote: [ -> ]nice!

(10-15-2017, 11:37 PM)Phantom Wrote: [ -> ]nice!

can I get some constructive feedback for once? [Image: emo.gif~c200]
constructive feedback
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very good and noice character with deep backstory ,but you could use less pews and more not-pews
constructive feedback, no memes
(10-16-2017, 12:17 AM)Scituzer Wrote: [ -> ][Image: hDzzZrs.png]
very good and noice character with deep backstory ,but you could use less pews and more not-pews
constructive feedback, no memes

nice!
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feedback lives matter, nice rp, nice shjotes, pvpwhore
You know (memery aside) I'm genuinely interested in people's opinion about my writing. Any criticism or praise is welcome and I promise not to shoot you ingame just because you said something bad about my writing.

My most recent stories in progress are these two: The Great Escape and Amidst the Sand


EDIT: You can also use this place to bump me with any comms I've missed.
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