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Rusty Wing Characters Feedback.

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Active characters:

Michael Sherman

Photo: Click!
Occupation: Pioneer, independent discoverer
Occupation History: independent trader
Bio-thread: N/A (WIP)
Ethnicity: Probably Libertonian.
Known family members: No information available
Age: Unknown. Approximately 34 years.
Ship: Rogues bomber “Chocolate”
Fraction relations:
Friendly: Planetform, [Star], Freelancers, Mollys, Liberty Rogues, zoners
Note: Good reputation with Planetform connected with cooperation about stuff from Uncharted system.
Unfriendly: LSF, Armed Forces, Bounty Hunters
Personal relations:
Friendly: Andrew Williams
Neutral: Leela Tornbold, Wanderer Zeril
Unfriendly: No individuals.
RP Links:
Stories:
Personal Neuro-Net. Target ID: Michael Sherman
Communications:
To: Planetform Inc. /\ From: Michael Sherman
To: Star Enterprises =/\= From: Michael Sherman
To: Wanderer Zeril =/\= From: Michael Sherman

Curie Mosley

Photo: Click!
Occupation: CRO of Star Enterprises
Occupation History: Junior engineer of the rebel troops of the Kingdom of Bretonia, Leeds.
Bio-thread: N/A (WIP)
Ethnicity: Bretonian
Known family members:
Mother: Catherine Mosley
State: KIA
Age: 24 years old
Ship: [Star]Rusty.Dream - long-range research ship
RP Links:
Stories:
N/A (WIP)
Communications:
To: Curie Mosley
To: Rheinland Federal Polizei << From: Captain Curie Mosley
From Rheinland's Federal Polizei - For sale: Snub Armor MK X
To: Zoners, traders, patrons of The Seraphim | Subject: Repairs of Meridian

Rory Revkie

Photo: Click!
Occupation: The Leader of Blackwing Squadron
Occupation History: Engineer of Alster Shipyard, Engineer of Gateway
Bio-thread: Click! (WIP)
Ethnicity: Rheinlander
Known family members: No.
Age: 27 years old
Ship: Gateway|-GSV-Minerva
RP Links:
Stories:
Click!
Communications:
To: Alan Shepard // From: Rory Revkie
To: Freelancers, OSI, zoners, people to hire
Application Form

Frieder Molnar

Photo: Click!
Occupation: Unknown
Occupation History: smuggler, the member of an expedition company "Genivieve", CEO and the only one member of "Red Star Company"
Bio-thread: Click! (WIP)
Ethnicity: Rheinlander
Known family members:
Father: Henry Molnar
Occupation: Soldier
Current state: KIA
Place of death: Unknown
Mother: Elizabeth Molnar
Occupation: Ship Engineer
Current state: Alive
Place of occupation: New Berlin
Sister: Amelie Molnar
Occupation: Unknown
Place of occupation: Unknown
Age: 31 years old
Ship: "Red Star" - freighter
RP Links:
Stories:
Click
Communications:
To: "Red Star"

Isami Yukari

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Occupation: Supervisor of transport devision of GMG
Occupation History: GMG Miner
Bio-thread: Boop
Ethnicity: Kusarian
Known family members:
Wife: Kara Yukari
Ship: Nope
RP Links:
Stories:
N/A (WIP)
Communications:
N/A (WIP)

Poor developed characters:

[Still in development. Probably they will transfer in "Active characters" section later]

Adrien Chevalier

Photo: Click!
Occupation: The Seraphim
Occupation History: Gallic Royal Army
Bio-thread: N/A (WIP)
Ethnicity: Gallic
Known family members:
Son of Jonathan Chevalier and Émilie Chevalier.
Age: 30 years old
Ship: //WIP
RP Links:
Stories:
N/A (WIP)
Communications:
Application to The Seraphim
//I have some big plans on this character. So I will transfer it soon.

Michelle Rancourt

Photo: No
Occupation: Gallic Royal Police
Occupation History: Gallic Royal Navy
Bio-thread: N/A (WIP)
Ethnicity: Gallic
Known family members: No
Age: 27 years old
Ship: //WIP
RP Links:
Stories:
N/A (WIP)
Communications:
Application to GRP

Alpha-2

Photo: Click!
Occupation: Captain of "Den of Minerva"
Occupation History: Engineer of Alster Shipyard
Bio-thread: N/A (WIP)
Ethnicity: Rheinlander
Known family members: No
Age: Unknown
Ship: The.Den.of.Minerva
RP Links:
Stories:
N/A (WIP)
Communications:
To all Companies hauling Cargo
Grey Market Registration

Magnus Arvidsson

Photo: No
Occupation: CEO of "Synth Foods"
Occupation History: The worker of "Synth Foods"
Bio-thread: N/A (WIP)
Ethnicity: Rheinlander
Known family members: No
Age: 39 year's old
Ship: //WIP
RP Links:
Stories:
N/A (WIP)
Communications:
to: Synth Food -|- from: IMG -|- Topic: Business Proposal
Thread Modes To: All Synth Foods representatives | From: Kyu Akibara, OSI
To: Synth Foods | From: Kusari State Police

Gerhard Walter

Photo: Click!
State: Alive
Occupation: Special operative
Occupation History: Junker, pirate, trader
Bio-thread: WIP
Ethnicity: Rheinlander
Known family members: None
Age: 37 years old
Ship: Rust.Defiance - civilian gunboat
RP Links:
Stories:
Had a couple drinks, saw a couple things... [With the captain of Rust.Defiance]
Communications:
None

KIA characters:

[These characters disappeared, were killed or incapacitated in-RP. Some of them through SRP can return]

Astero Solar

Photo: Click!
State: In coma
Occupation: Hoverbike racer, handyman
Occupation History: None
Bio-thread: Click!
Ethnicity: Unknown
Known family members:
Doughter of Akeno Solar and Rock Solar.
Age: Unknown
Ship: None
RP Links:
Stories:
[ctOS] Profile: Astero Solar
Communications:
Application for HOTGEAR
//this character was created for HOTGEAR event.
//She was planned as a pony-character, by the way. Don't click, if you hate stuff like that.

Amelie Molnar

Photo: Click!
State: Missed in Action
Occupation: None
Occupation History: Commandant of Royal Navy Foreign Legion, the doctor of chemical sciences of New-Tokyo university
Bio-thread: No
Ethnicity: Rheinlander
Known family members:
Father: Henry Molnar
Occupation: Soldier
Current state: KIA
Place of death: Unknown
Mother: Elizabeth Molnar
Occupation: Ship Engineer
Current state: Alive
Place of occupation: New Berlin
Brother: Frieder Molnar
Occupation: Unknown
Current state: Unknown
Age: 29 years old
Ship: [RN]-Lune
Current state: Destroyed
RP Links:
Stories:
Tau 23 accident
Communications:
Application
Patrol Log #1
To: GRN, Légion Etrangère, La Marine Royale Gauloise,<AG] | From: Kusari State Police
Patrol Log #2
To: GMS, EFL, Transport divisions,gallic civilians]From: Royal Navy Foreign Legion

Rebecca McAllister

Photo: Click!
State: MIA
Occupation: The Order sleeper agent
Occupation History: None
Bio-thread: None, and won't be
Ethnicity: Libertonian
Known family members: None
Age: 27 year's old
Ship: Thunderblast ( 015A "Nephthys" The Order Very Heavy Fighter )
RP Links:
Stories:
Rebecca McAllister - Personal Neural-Network
Communications:
None

Really like the stuff you do to keep smaller factions alive, there is a very certain one I know that will fall apart the moment you don't contribute anymore, keep it up! Wink

Where is Tristans Bio?

Apart from that good work, rusty

(07-14-2017, 09:15 PM)Shelco Wrote: [ -> ]
Really like the stuff you do to keep smaller factions alive, there is a very certain one I know that will fall apart the moment you don't contribute anymore, keep it up!

Thanks for this words! Nice to hear, that you approve my work. ^^

Royal Navy Foreign Legion Wrote:Where is Tristans Bio?

Apart from that good work, rusty

I'm going to pay special attention to him. That's why I even created a separate account for him.
Thanks, BW! ^^

One character added.

Don't overwork yourself Wink

Good jobs!

Added two characters.

Nice stories and great person at the same time! ^^

(09-07-2017, 07:32 PM)CrazyD Wrote: [ -> ]Nice stories and great person at the same time! ^^

Thanks a lot! Aww