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RE: Teide / Reasoner feedback - Traxit - 12-16-2023
(12-16-2023, 03:37 AM)Fab Wrote: if the politics and lore are too much of a stretch, I can rewrite a portion of its backstory quite easily, and with no loose ends. a jumphole anomaly is all I need. thoughts?sure I guess, a Judicator being an unfortunate victim of the blackout and ending up in a completely hostile region makes sense.
(12-16-2023, 04:28 PM)Stoner_Steve Wrote: I feel that something needs to be said as to why the corsairs were chosen over other groups in the sector. Especially in light of a crew of 100-200 that would also need to be in agreement with this. (or is the Captain keeping them in line with threats of death?)
Edit: Things like this are also great little tidbits
RE: Teide / Reasoner feedback - Fab - 12-16-2023
(12-16-2023, 08:35 PM)Traxit Wrote:(12-16-2023, 03:37 AM)Fab Wrote: if the politics and lore are too much of a stretch, I can rewrite a portion of its backstory quite easily, and with no loose ends. a jumphole anomaly is all I need. thoughts?sure I guess, a Judicator being an unfortunate victim of the blackout and ending up in a completely hostile region makes sense.
(12-16-2023, 04:28 PM)Stoner_Steve Wrote: I feel that something needs to be said as to why the corsairs were chosen over other groups in the sector. Especially in light of a crew of 100-200 that would also need to be in agreement with this. (or is the Captain keeping them in line with threats of death?)
Edit: Things like this are also great little tidbits
I'm cooking a chain of events that will answer all those questions, eventually. thanks again for the feedback
RE: Teide / Reasoner feedback - Semir Gerkhan - 01-12-2024
When you started this thread, my immediate thought was that you were simply looking for a way to justify the ingame use of a ship incompatible with Corsair IFF and ID.
I'm still not sure if what you're doing isn't exactly that, but I have to say that, in my humble opinion, the narrative and editing work you're doing is really good.
I don't know if what you are building will be enough for the SRP to be approved by whoever has to do it, but your story keeps me hooked and eager to see where it goes. Furthermore, you are making what you propose start to seem somewhat plausible to me.
Many times it seems that we only post to say what we don't like about what others do, and that is not fair. That's why I want you to know that, personally, I'm liking it.