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Project Castile Feedback - Alex. - 12-28-2009
It took a while to get the Geb into position to take that picture, remember Schlurbi?:P(Yeah, I hate Nomad NPCs).
Apart from that, I like what your doing! Keep it up!
Project Castile Feedback - Kuze - 12-28-2009
I like it...its cool. If you are using PS, you can try these custom shapes:
http://graphicssoft.about.com/od/photoshop...s/shapes1_9.htm
Project Castile Feedback - Mr.Sanguinetti - 12-28-2009
Beautiful in its every meaning. Swallowed a drop of tear. I'll mark this one into my 'why Liberty needs a revolution' dossier. Best wishes!
Project Castile Feedback - schlurbi - 12-30-2009
Thanks again for all those positive replies. Today I have added two strips, because I wont be here for the next three days.
Thanks for reading as well.
Project Castile Feedback - schlurbi - 01-08-2010
Sorry for the Photobucket Problem right now, the story will be back up on Thursday for those who havent read it yet.
The next Part(s) should be out then as well.
Project Castile Feedback - pchwang - 01-09-2010
I assume you mean next Thursday?
Damn, and I just finished building this Time Machine. I guess I'll go kill time and go shoot some Morlocks or something.
Project Castile Feedback - schlurbi - 01-13-2010
Actually I meant Tuesday. Anyway, Story and Signature are up again.
Project Castile Feedback - Akura - 01-13-2010
Do want more...
This story is awesome, so easy to read!
Project Castile Feedback - pchwang - 01-13-2010
Just one question:
Why do you keep using "teached?"
Everything else is grammatically correct as far as I could tell... But, as the great Dubya once said, "There's an old saying in Tennessee I know it's in Texas, probably in Tennessee that says, fool me once, shame on - shame on you. Fool me You can't get fooled again."
Project Castile Feedback - schlurbi - 01-16-2010
Added two pages without the word Teached:P
The Panels on Page 13 are a bit meh.