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[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Jeremy Hunter - 04-10-2011
Change the rating to X...might be a thought.
That was beautifully written Prysin. Her background is well thought out too ^_^
Though the imprisonment part is extreme.
Funny thing, I was going to do something similar, but not anywhere near extreme as that, for my Navy char's background.
Now I'll seem like a copycat X_X curse my slowness.
And that picture was cool.
Keep it up.
I can see why she wants Outcasts dead.
I wager she would like both Crete and Malta burn?
Rating out of 10
10/10
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Prysin - 04-10-2011
Thanks for the rating, glad you like it. Last part leading up to CR and some insight in CR daily life will come later. Most likely, ill make a separate "Diary" thread once i finish this part
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Jeremy Hunter - 04-10-2011
10/10
Nice intro.
Cant wait for the Diary.
Been awhile since there has been a story like that.
Evangeline is the other good one...
Keep it up!
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Prysin - 04-10-2011
Need to fix Sidious story too, so the next chapter, which will revolve around the life as a CR, wont be started just yet
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Jeremy Hunter - 04-10-2011
' Wrote:Need to fix Sidious story too, so the next chapter, which will revolve around the life as a CR, wont be started just yet
Ok.
I'll take the time to add to my story and/or start another.
I'll be waiting.
Keep it up!
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Prysin - 04-11-2011
meh, tried to fix sidious's story, but its so long since i worked on it that i forgot my initial editing plans...
Next Chapter of Eve's story is coming out soon™
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Jeremy Hunter - 04-11-2011
9/10.
Bit boring, but hey.
There is always a bit of boredom.
Keep it up :)
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Prysin - 04-11-2011
' Wrote:9/10.:(
Bit boring, but hey.
There is always a bit of boredom.
Keep it up :)
Next bit coming soon™
fortunately, its still not closed or invisid as i feared it would be.... oh well, ill keep it going until i get told otherwise.
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Prysin - 04-14-2011
updated Eve's story.
Please give some feedback on it, especially grammar vise or if i keep using too difficult/weird word choises
[FEEDBACK] Prysin's Characters - Jeremy Hunter - 04-14-2011
Yeahh...
Offically Prysin, expect me to steal that Nyx.
15/10.
All is good, no worries!
Keep it up!