(09-10-2023, 09:14 PM)Traxit Wrote: my 2cents;

the first 3 and a half minutes being "landscape shots" gets old fast, and then you dump all of the action in the last two minutes.

flip your clips arounds, even just inverting the clip order would be a great start.

for a 5.0 trailer you're really underselling.

(09-11-2023, 08:27 PM)Kalhmera Wrote: Looked nice, loved the music from House T.V. show.

• The looping same audio from the song was a bit annoying.
  
• The lack of transitions that went with the audio bothered me.
  
• You had some great B-Roll of the systems on some of the clips, but your panning on some was too fast and some of your camera movements were all over the place. One of them even made me a little bit nauseous.
  
• The clips of combat (at least the way they were recorded and just kind of thrown into the end) left me underwhelmed. Really getting in there as the camera ship would have really put you into the action.
  
• A lack of a preview of the POB changes and FLHook upgrades left me disappointed. I would have at least liked to see a preview or teaser of that, but I realize that wouldn't be easy to do without derailing the effect of the rest of the video.

(09-12-2023, 12:04 AM)Leo Wrote: While I'm at a firm "meh" for the patch release itself (just saying), I will give some critiques for your video if you're interested. Many of these might just be personal gripes, but I figure I could give some points on it.

• The looping same audio from the song was a bit annoying.
  
• The lack of transitions that went with the audio bothered me.
  
• You had some great B-Roll of the systems on some of the clips, but your panning on some was too fast and some of your camera movements were all over the place. One of them even made me a little bit nauseous.
  
• The clips of combat (at least the way they were recorded and just kind of thrown into the end) left me underwhelmed. Really getting in there as the camera ship would have really put you into the action.
  
• A lack of a preview of the POB changes and FLHook upgrades left me disappointed. I would have at least liked to see a preview or teaser of that, but I realize that wouldn't be easy to do without derailing the effect of the rest of the video.

I hope those help with any other videos you do in the future. Otherwise, well done. I can tell you're passionate about it so keep it up!

~Leo