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Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 01-30-2012
Just posted the first post in a new story.
Tell me what you think, especially the explanation of how the machine works. I had some downright horrible writer's block and it took me ages to get that part done, I'm not entirely sure that what I ended up with is very clear.
An Unsheduled Vacation of Sorts
EDIT: also if anyone can't see any quotation marks, please PM me or something. I think I fixed it but it would appear that copying from Word to the forums is an inperfect science :/
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 02-02-2012
An Unscheduled Vacation of Sorts
Just posted another, uh... post.
Let me know what you think.