You're putting a good amount of time and effort into your model proposals, but you're forgetting one of the main parts of modeling a ship: You should keep the balance of the ship in mind, which means it should have a decent shape and size. Proposals like this one which are too fat or those like your BHG caps which are too thin are generally considered unfit for balancing and either don't make it ingame or when they do, they become a problematic ship stat-wise.

That aside, the concept you've provided looks more like a freighter than anything else, and a comment mainly based on my personal taste - Recolored BW texture doesn't work as good as Rheinland textures.

P.S: As mentioned above, LWB is already getting new VHF and bomber, and there's a Waran replacement already submitted as well.