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+---- Thread: Birth of Broken Dreams - How'd i do? (/showthread.php?tid=100999)
Birth of Broken Dreams - How'd i do? - Sirius.Kane - 06-28-2013
It was my first story , so i would REALLY love to know how was it
It is a bio of my character's past , i will continue it if i get some good feedback - the next part will be better , since this one was supposed to be a kind of intro/prologue ^^
http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=100804&pid=1361866#pid1361866
I got the story planned ahead , so writing the next part should be easy & the story would be even better than this one
SO, i'd like YOU to point out any big mistakes you may find, or just tell me if you liked it
Thanks.