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Antioch Family feedback. - APDAF - 09-24-2013

Hi APDAF here I am looking for feedback for this thread as I am not the best at RP and my writing skills are lacking in places.

I am welcome to any and all feedback critique and advice that anyone may have.


RE: The log of George. A. Antioch feedback. - Stig - 10-06-2013

The story looks fine mate, but then im no story teller.
I did notice the odd spelling or grammer mistake, again im no expert.

What was your faction tag ? I think it was Bowex , if so I dont recall any mention of it, I may have just forgotton as I was reading your Bio.

Stig


RE: The log of George. A. Antioch feedback. - APDAF - 10-06-2013

Yes I am trying to fix the tag but I will have to do that after the roll-back plus the fact that I don't know how to properly remove it.

I am glad that you like it.


RE: The log of George. A. Antioch feedback. - Shizune - 03-11-2014

I enjoyed the RP I've had between you and Big B with Angel, no trigger finger notice here and good RP spirit I'd say personally.

Keep it up!


RE: The log of George. A. Antioch feedback. - APDAF - 03-12-2014

Thanks... I always try to keep to my character's core values.


RE: Antioch Family feedback. - APDAF - 04-07-2014

Now opened up to all of the Antioch Family.


RE: Antioch Family feedback. - Big_B - 04-07-2014

I always enjoy to Rp with you, you give all your characters different great personality which makes them special in their own way, so that one char dont behaves like the other one, even if they are all from the same family and I appreciate your help whenever i'm ingame.

Kudos for that!



RE: Antioch Family feedback. - Occam Razor - 07-03-2014

I met George and Matilda in space on my K'Hara. Was fun and I am sure we'll meet again, soon. Wasn't there for this week. We'll continue this soon.


RE: Antioch Family feedback. - APDAF - 07-03-2014

Thanks!

And yes it was fun can't wait for it to continue.


RE: Antioch Family feedback. - Cashew - 07-03-2014

I always love your role play I don't know why you say you aren't very good Big Grin