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Curtain Jerker feedback thread - Curtain Jerker - 02-06-2015
Hey all.
First and foremost, thanks a ton for reading any of my stories.
Please use this for feedback. Any/all constructive feedback is appreciated.
Thanks again!
Link to stories - From Pirate to Privateer
RE: Curtain Jerker feedback thread - Commissar - 02-07-2015
Hullo!
Slightly belated, but welcome to the community nonetheless. I really enjoyed reading Pirate to Privateer, and it'll be interesting to see how Honeycutt fits in with the war. He looks like an interesting character - it'd be neat to hear more about his background and just what he got up to aboard Jocelyn’s Delight. My only niggle is that the Commodore and the RFP Officer both seemed to comply with Honeycutt's demand awfully quickly - I'd have expected a little more resistance from the men holding all the cards, but I'm sure there's some sort of plan at work here...
Keep up the good work!
RE: Curtain Jerker feedback thread - Curtain Jerker - 02-09-2015
Thanks for reading and the feedback/welcome...I would have replied sooner but I was out of town all weekend.
Didn't want you to think I was ignoring your kind words.