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Encheta Shimoa and the BCV Feedback - Encheta - 10-16-2008 Ok, this is my first RP story so constructive criticisms are welcome, right down to proper formatting and such.. I was never good at english during high school and since then things have kind of kept going downhill. The only thing I feel confident/good in writing nowadays is reports and similar types of assessment at uni - not narratives and the like. Sooner or later errors will pop out at me as I continue the story, but.. yeah, all help is welcome. :) |