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Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - Fletcher - 10-22-2008
This topic is for people to place their feedback for my work in here.
I will be working on writing more to my stories soon. I just want to link all my feedback in here, save me making a topic for each story.
If you read and feedback, thank you. I love constructive feedback to help guide me to improving my stuff.
You can even leave feedback on my characters in-game if you wish :D
Links to active RP:
- To be added
Links to discontinued RP:
- Dr. Josef Heilburger. A Farmer. A Freedom Fighter. A Medic. - Shattered.Silo
- Shelly Boothbishop - Bowex)Godber
- Dr. Ivo Robotnik - Cat-girl hater, comic-relief
- Colonel Edison Trent, the story after the Nomad Wars //On hold.
- Operations Officer O'Callahan - The musings of a crippled body and soul. //Currently just a story thing, bear with me.
- Liberty Autonomous Sentinel Project (v2)
- The Logs of the Rhondda Valley
- Victor Hans Strauthe
- Shattered Silo, The latest calamity in the LWB ranks //Hit the button, recreating character in new premise.
- Edison Patrick Rowlands - A Sentinel of Freeport 1
- Syndicalist Party of Bretonia - Political RP
- Fletcher Arkwright - Bretonian Officer
- Slater - The new Bounty Hunter
- The Sentinel - Liberty's AI craft
- The Sentinel 201 Alpha - Liberty's AI craft Gunboat
- Sentinel 301 - The AI Bombers are ready
- Sentinel 167 - Long Range Self Reliant Fighter Live Test
- Knight 101, The Bretonian Automated Knight Systems
- Sentinel Public Relations Office
- Liberty: Operation Bit-Byte, A Black Ops Operation against Rheinland
- Spirit of Boudicca - The Junker and Molly Mining Ship
- LOL-Trader, Another trader
Feel free to leave any kind of feedback! I like it! Makes me more motivated!
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - torchwood - 10-29-2008
on the edison trent story i do not think the leader of the RoS will be happy. you seemed to of named a nomad scanner after him. other than that i loved it. keep up the good work
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - Fletcher - 10-29-2008
' Wrote:on the edison trent story i do not think the leader of the RoS will be happy. you seemed to of named a nomad scanner after him. other than that i loved it. keep up the good workI did? :mellow: Where is that in the story?:mellow:
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - torchwood - 10-29-2008
Quote:Ken fired up the 'Lohengrin' sensors that the Rheinland Military developed to scan for Nomad lets say artificial equipment and data
one letter differance
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - Fletcher - 10-29-2008
Ah I see, thanks for that. I better come up with another name from good ole Rheinland.
EDIT: I changed the sensor name from Lohengrin to Seher. According to Google translator, its German for Seer.
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - Yuva - 02-22-2009
I like your Trent story But why you killed Orillion I thought he is still alive..........by the way Dont make Trent Nomad infected......then I have to hunt him down...(laughs).......by the way story was good.... but you should have added some part like how he was found in newcastel.....
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - Fletcher - 02-22-2009
' Wrote:I like your Trent story But why you killed Orillion I thought he is still alive..........by the way Dont make Trent Nomad infected......then I have to hunt him down...(laughs).......by the way story was good.... but you should have added some part like how he was found in newcastel.....Thanks for the feedback.
Aye, the original Osiris is history, but the wreck of the ship is in the game. I wanted to RP that in. But I never wrote that Orillian was declared dead. Officially, most of the crew is MIA. No solid proof that they're dead.
I don't plan to make Trent infected, but I doubt I can get a logical RP with Trent and the Nomads together, I shudder to the outcries of "No Trent noooo" and "You can't infect Trent he's the hero!". Bleugh.
How he was found in Newcastle? That's to be written up my good man. I have a few ideas, but never the time or the patience to decide and write them up. I wanted to make Newcastle and event in itself, but lack of organization made it not leave the drawing board.
I should update the story, I have altered Trent slightly.
Once again, thanks for the feedback.
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - Nathan - 06-21-2009
i saw you in kappa! so your a navy robot eh tut tut tut. capturing time!
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - Fletcher - 06-21-2009
' Wrote:i saw you in kappa! so your a navy robot eh tut tut tut. capturing time!Oh? It has no official affiliation to nobody. Sentinel 167 is basically a Sentinel ship that has no directives, its just exploring, trying to find its input and expand its library without the use of force.
And what faction would you be?
Fletcher's Stories and Roleplay Feedback Thread - Serpentis - 08-01-2009
Well, Fletcher Ive read the Mining ship Bio, and it's well thought off and really good. Id love to read some stories about their adventures (^^) it was really good:)