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+---- Thread: Eliza Valdez Cyber Feetpack (/showthread.php?tid=146467)
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - Backo - 10-15-2017
(10-15-2017, 11:14 PM)Sombra Hookier Wrote: You should link the dickbutt post here as well.
The original was nuked because it was regarded as too ooRP of a joke.
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - Chuba - 10-15-2017
nice!
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - pillow - 10-15-2017
nice!
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - Backo - 10-15-2017
(10-15-2017, 11:27 PM)Chuba Wrote: nice!
(10-15-2017, 11:37 PM)Phantom Wrote: nice!
can I get some constructive feedback for once?
![[Image: emo.gif~c200]](http://rs39.pbsrc.com/albums/e154/TheRedElf/emo.gif~c200){kind=small}
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - Shiki - 10-15-2017
constructive feedback
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - ONIKS - 10-16-2017
![[Image: hDzzZrs.png]](https://i.imgur.com/hDzzZrs.png)
very good and noice character with deep backstory ,but you could use less pews and more not-pews
constructive feedback, no memes
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - Backo - 10-16-2017
(10-16-2017, 12:17 AM)Scituzer Wrote:
very good and noice character with deep backstory ,but you could use less pews and more not-pews
constructive feedback, no memes
nice!
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - Backo - 11-22-2017
![[Image: img1.jpg]](http://www.liveadmins.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/03/img1.jpg)
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - Chuba - 11-23-2017
feedback lives matter, nice rp, nice shjotes, pvpwhore
RE: Eliza Valdez Feedback - Backo - 11-28-2017
You know (memery aside) I'm genuinely interested in people's opinion about my writing. Any criticism or praise is welcome and I promise not to shoot you ingame just because you said something bad about my writing.
My most recent stories in progress are these two: The Great Escape and Amidst the Sand
EDIT: You can also use this place to bump me with any comms I've missed.