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Battle of Sigma 13 - General Nakazawa - 09-02-2006
COMMS ID:General Nakazawa
Transmition To:Blood Dragon High Command
This is Fleet admeral Nakazawa, I am calling to let you know that there is a fleet of 4 Battleship groups parked outside the Chucogu-Sigma 13 JH. My fighter escort was distroyed in Sigma 19 by a Corsair patrol and my ship only carrys anty cap ship weps, so it wold be nice if you could send a Gunboat group or two to asist. We will draw them away from the JH so that they are not distroyed instantly upon exit.
Please hurry.
General Nakazawa out
Transmition Terminated...
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COMMS ID:General Nakazawa
Transmition To:Gunboat Captains
We managed to distroy 1 Battleship and 3 distroyers in the first few volies. We are curintly pownding away at another Battleship but their fighters are causing some magor damage and my turits arent nearly fast anof to get any were neer them. Please focus on the fighters and the other Gunboats. Ive already lost my main engians and am running on back ups.
General Nakazawa out
Transmition Terminated...
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COMMS ID:Kusari Battleship General, Chin
Transmition To:Kusari Inteligence HQ
We have reason to belive that we are curintly ingaged agenst one of the top leaders of the Blood Dragons, a Fleet Admeral by the name of General Nakazawa. We have taken down his shilds and nocked out his engians but wold like to know if we are to bord and capure him or to just distroy him now. We have 3 Divistions of Mariens onbord and have several bording craft in our bay. I await further instuction.
General Chin out
Transmition terminated...
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COMMS ID:Kusari Inteligance Oficer, Chow
Transmition To:Kusari Battleship General, Chin
We recomend that you atempt to take him alive. He will prove to be verry usfull if we can capture him. If you cold take some of his comand staf as well that wold be even beter.
Oficer Chow out
Transmition terminated...
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COMMS ID:General Nakazawa
Transmition To:All ships in range.
This is the Battleship "Lee Memorial" requesting asistance agenst the Kusari armada. We have taken hevy losses and it apears they are atempting to capture this ship and my crew. I have tried to activate the self distruct but I think they have disabled it some how. I have orderd my crew to abandon ship as we have lost all engians and main power. We are dead in the water. Me and my comand staf have baracaded our selvs on the bridge but are not winning this fight. I plead to all in the area, please help! All of our reinforsments have eather bean killed or fled.
Transmition cut off...
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COMMS ID:Personal line
Transmition To:Generals Yaht
This is General Nakazawa, I am seald in my ready room. I only have a few minuts at the most. All of my comand staf have eather been captured or killed. Inform the Lane Hakers of my situation. They shold know what to do.
AHHH................
Transmition lost...
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Battle of Sigma 13 - General Nakazawa - 09-02-2006
Ok i just relized this and this is my first RP story so please coment.
Battle of Sigma 13 - Admiral Yamato - 09-02-2006
Great post, man. Bloody Kusari navy.
Battle of Sigma 13 - marauder - 09-02-2006
Yup, it's a great post.
The kusari navy are a right pain in the butt, I've been bracketed by 3 BS patrols over NT before, took me a week to loot a cruise disrupter again, and the best part of 3 hours to get enough bots to fix my hull too.
Battle of Sigma 13 - General Nakazawa - 09-03-2006
so no one has any thing more consructive than it was good? i whant critisisam!
Battle of Sigma 13 - Admiral Yamato - 09-03-2006
Well, other than some grammar and spelling errors, nothing truly detracts from a relatively solid plot.
Battle of Sigma 13 - Nightfall - 09-03-2006
Yep, excellent post IMO, I enjoyed reading it.
Battle of Sigma 13 - General Nakazawa - 09-03-2006
Ok i CANT be that good of a wrighter that no one has any thing to say about it.
Battle of Sigma 13 - Angel - 09-03-2006
We'll, Maybe more Information, but don't dround it, give the reader tastes of whats going on, without giveing the hole meal, and personal thoughts from characters goes a long way, so we the readers can see where each person is coming from.
Battle of Sigma 13 - Dab - 09-03-2006
Good examples are "Mayday in Tau-31." "Beginning of the End." "Twilight of Peace." And "Ghosts of the Past." Threads. They all show very good posts and examples of RP. Definitely look at Kane's posts. And Angels. Mine are pretty good as well. Virus almost as good as me. We are the main 4 RP posters..