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Ema Matsuda Feedback - Shiki - 03-03-2018
I would like you to share your thought about this RP project of mine.
RE: Ema Matsude Feedback - Backo - 03-03-2018
I just read the story and it's great. Can't wait to see more.
My only complaint is Ema sounds awfully close to Enma. You should really think of new original names.
RE: Ema Matsuda Feedback - Kiith - 03-03-2018
Oh. but this just creates an extra level of connectivity between all these important, yet distant characters.
Great work, Shiki! One can really see you went to great effort creating a relatable yet enjoyably strange soon-to-be protagonist!
RE: Ema Matsuda Feedback - Shiki - 03-03-2018
As for the name, if I am honest, I used a name generator. And this is just a coincidence. But othewise I would like to hear some real criticism.
RE: Ema Matsuda Feedback - Backo - 03-03-2018
(03-03-2018, 09:24 PM)Shikizumi Wrote: That's the sort of woman he was.
Was -she- born a man? Or is it a typo? With you I can never know. So please clarify.
RE: Ema Matsuda Feedback - Yaoquizque - 03-03-2018
This is the best piece of role-play I have ever read. Can't wait to read more.
RE: Ema Matsuda Feedback - Apollon - 03-03-2018
Please delete.
RE: Ema Matsuda Feedback - Shiki - 03-03-2018
(03-03-2018, 09:55 PM)Ghostazarashi Wrote: Please delete.
Excuse me my friend? You could've delete your post by yourself, as far as I am aware you are a moderator.