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Arin Dixon - Personal Logs from a Liberty Navy Pilot - MyOrwellianNightmare - 02-11-2022

I've not written much so far, just an introduction, but any feedback is most certainly welcome


RE: Arin Dixon - Short Stories from a Liberty Navy Pilot - Stratus_Hound - 02-11-2022

Well, it is pretty basic, but no major issues, pretty good for an introduction. Kudos for you for going for a little bit older character, I think they turn out to be more interesting than all the tweenies ace pilots we get. Well, I am nobody to talk, but people tend to go for some kind of visual formatting in their RP posts, and while it is not a neccessity it certainly adds a bit of flair to the post. Waiting for more point of view 1st person bits, they add to the character quite a bit. Also, looking forward to meeting Arin in-game, good luck with development!


RE: Arin Dixon - Short Stories from a Liberty Navy Pilot - MyOrwellianNightmare - 02-11-2022

(02-11-2022, 01:30 PM)Stratus_Hound Wrote: Well, it is pretty basic, but no major issues, pretty good for an introduction. Kudos for you for going for a little bit older character, I think they turn out to be more interesting than all the tweenies ace pilots we get. Well, I am nobody to talk, but people tend to go for some kind of visual formatting in their RP posts, and while it is not a neccessity it certainly adds a bit of flair to the post. Waiting for more point of view 1st person bits, they add to the character quite a bit. Also, looking forward to meeting Arin in-game, good luck with development!

Thanks for the feedback. Initially I just wanted an introduction. Something to make my character have a bit of background rather than just suddenly existing out of nowhere

I need to find some sort of "flair" / visual formatting to use as a lot of posts will be first person personal logs from here on.