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feedback on a story - masternerdguy - 07-28-2009 oops. some kind of error. anyway, feedback on this would be nice http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=43419 feedback on a story - Laowai - 07-29-2009 So generally your guy is kinda crazy who likes to commit acts of terrorism and extortion because he is board? Haha nice.... Story isnt bad:) feedback on a story - Crossbow - 07-29-2009 nice story, and yes , i dont think there are any masterminds yet, however i think a mastermind does not do the job himself , he should be smart enough to let others do it and get away clean when it goes wrong. feedback on a story - masternerdguy - 07-29-2009 ' Wrote:So generally your guy is kinda crazy who likes to commit acts of terrorism and extortion because he is board? yep:D |