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Nomad Life begins - dogrocket - 09-21-2009
Hi, i am noob when it comes to writting, so i need help/criticism and any comments are welcome.
i have screenshots to post for the final edit.
this is one of my first ever attempts to write a story, but dont hold back ha!
A short story about a Lonely Nomad
Around 815 A.S. Unknown System, Nomad Shrine. The Awakening
adrift in a glass cocoon,deep within the nomad shrine, lay a small dormant energy, Gathering strength it begins to grow to evolve, into a small streamline blue skinned entity, its mind is strong and highly intelligent .Awoken from an eternity of slumber. Surrounded by a deep mist, Drifting into weightlessness Emotions begin to flood its mind. Yet, there was nothing to see and nothing to feel but the great void, The loneliness was so great it envelops my every essence. What am i..
Exploring my surroundings, eager to find some answers.i leave this haunting place, finding myself afloat in a vast space, filled with distant stars floating rocks and mysterious gas clouds. i look back, amazed i gaze upon my birth place, a magnificent structure. Stood proud amongst the stars.Dark in colour but arms spread open either to be described as a fierce guardian to deter predators but also appearing as mother with welcoming arms. And so to continue the search for my role in this universe.crossing the vast openness of space, i reach a strange hole in very fabric of space, what could this be. Moving in closer to make a more detailed analysis I'm pulled into the hole travelling at speed greater than light, then suddenly I'm transported far from the space i began my journey. Strange feeling, inter cellular nervous impulses around my body, whats happening to me, then at my marvel its clear. The strange hole i came through is a wormhole a short cut through space.. interesting.
A short story about a Lonely Nomad Morph
Around 815 A.S. Unknown System, Nomad Shrine. The Awakening
adrift in a glass cocoon,deep within the nomad shrine, lay a small dormant energy, Gathering strength it begins to grow to evolve, into a small streamline blue skinned entity, its mind is strong and highly intelligent .Awoken from an eternity of slumber. Surrounded by a deep mist, Drifting into weightlessness Emotions begin to flood its mind. Yet, there was nothing to see and nothing to feel but the great void, The loneliness was so great it envelops my every essence. What am i..
Exploring my surroundings, eager to find some answers.i leave this haunting place, finding myself afloat in a vast space, filled with distant stars floating rocks and mysterious gas clouds. i look back, amazed i gaze upon my birth place, a magnificent structure. Stood proud amongst the stars.Dark in colour but arms spread open either to be described as a fierce guardian to deter predators but also appearing as mother with welcoming arms. And so to continue the search for my role in this universe.crossing the vast openness of space, i reach a strange hole in very fabric of space, what could this be. Moving in closer to make a more detailed analysis I'm pulled into the hole travelling at speed greater than light, then suddenly I'm transported far from the space i began my journey. Strange feeling, inter cellular nervous impulses around my body, whats happening to me, then at my marvel its clear. The strange hole i came through is a wormhole a short cut through space.. interesting.
First Encounter,
As i begin to explore this new found space i feel a presence of life. eager to learn more of this life form i follow the trail of electromagnetic impulses arousing my senses.
What a strange life form, it travels in a hard shell, that glows dull in the black of space. full with many organic objects stored in its Large Hard skinned belly. So to communicate with this being, how do i start and suddenly i can feel what he feels... he feels pain and fear. am i causing this distress.
Tobias_Storm: Freelancer/Trader:
what started as a typical afternoon, returning my fresh cargo of Consumer goods. on schedule. set to make a nice profit . After passing through the New York jump gate to reach Texas. With out warning i get a terrible head ache i pass it off as stress. But then Suddenly I'm struck with hallucinations, not too clear i see blurred vision of a blue figure Adrift in my mind i hear whispers but unable to make them out. in a great deal of pain and in fear of my life i send out a distress signal. with luck a liberty navy vessel hears my call.
caution. will harm be avoided.
A Second life form approaches in aid of this fearful creature. Unsure i take time to observe and study there actions. i can feel them, they know i am here, perhaps they more about me than i do. More of these hard vessels begin approaching. i feel great fear from these beings, everyone of them is in fear for there lives scared and also angry. there anger is directed at me. Confused i must wander away from these creatures to avoid Angry confrontation, But too late, they are on intercept course. bolts of energy gliding past. Pain fills within me, struck by a bolt of energy sends me rolling into another wormhole. Mostly unharmed i am lucky for my escape. I begin drawing energy from around me, from the light given off by these distant stars, incredible the abilities i posses. Feeling as though i can only imagine what one day i might be capable of.
Insight.
it appears clear that these strange being are wanted nothing less than my destruction. Have i been born in a world of hatred and war....
Or am i the sole target of their anger and hatred. The clear path is to keep a distance between me and those hostile species, but i must continue my journey for knowledge.
Maybe there are others like me, hiding away in the corners of space.
Reunion.
From the information gathered from the frail mind inside the angry Human, i can tell I've entered a system called omicron Delta.
whats that noise... its in my mind..whispers..visions. Strangely i am not afraid like whispers form a sibling i feel comforted by these voices.
pouring into my mind Vast and great knowledge, gathered over millions of years. Now gifted with the sight to see many areas of space from many sources of eyes. feels like being in multiple places at the same time. A battle is the main focus of these images not far from my current location. Compelled and driven and guided to this great battle emerging in the distance my species engaged with a hostile force known as The Order. From my new knowledge i understand this group to be responsible fro great pain to my race. But i am restricted to help with this threat, i am ill equipped with the means to defend us, guided to a small wrecked vessel i know i can infuse these inferior weapons to my advantage, Named by the order "reapers" I'm able to mount them into my Muscular structure. With the means to fight and defend i rush to support my brothers in battle.
Faced with Huge Hardened vessels unleashing hordes of anger, but that doesn't stop us, One hostile vessel overwhelmed with fear begins to flee leaving Just one Cold hard vessel enraged with anger, firing multiple projectiles destroying two of us, Now with anger and hatred filling my mind, pushes us to fight on harder.
Keepers Swooping in and out of fire, then returning and diving in to unleash a barrage of destruction upon this hostile vessel, its unable to compete with the numerous attacks, it begins to buckle and warp under the massive pressure. until eventually it can sustain no more it cracks open breathing fire and erupting from its centre Screaming mortal humans greeting death at there failure.
belonging.
After this small victory against an ever increasing threat we return to Omicron Iota, our home. where i will take my place as a wanderer, to gather more knowledge desperately need to keep us safe. To travel to far and distant reaches of space, forever increasing and expanding our knowledge.