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First forum RP - Fleur Dupont - 09-25-2009
Hi maybe you want to give me feedback. So i decided to open this thread.
Would be nice to read from you.
Link to the story thread: La famille Dupont
Cheers
Fleur
First forum RP - Riley Mackenzie - 09-25-2009
I clicked the link & found it to be dead...fascinated, I then poked at the link with a stick & it still remained unresponsive. I knelt down on my haunches beside it, put a small mirror to it's mouth & learned it was, in fact, not breathing.
All I could do after that was to stand here & call the 'Save A Link Foundation' hoping that the receptionist there might relay the message to you, so you can rush over here with a crash-cart & try & save it before rigor mortis sets in.
First forum RP - Fleur Dupont - 09-25-2009
' Wrote:I clicked the link & found it to be dead...fascinated, I then poked at the link with a stick & it still remained unresponsive. I knelt down on my haunches beside it, put a small mirror to it's mouth & learned it was, in fact, not breathing.
All I could do after that was to stand here & call the 'Save A Link Foundation' hoping that the receptionist there might relay the message to you, so you can rush over here with a crash-cart & try & save it before rigor mortis sets in.
Im sorry, the link is repaired now.
Cheers
Fleur