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The Stories of Pilot Marshall: Feedback! - mnbnbf - 09-26-2009
So this is the thread for my feedback. Tell me if you liked, didn't like, etc.
Criticism is always welcome. Also, if the pilot of the Black.Rose could tell me more accurately what you had said, that would be appreciated. I couldn't remember exactly what the conversation was. Thanks!
edit: Here is a link to the story.
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=48452