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Amaranth feedback - stardust47 - 10-23-2009

Read it here. It's for my Nomad Trial character, Amaranth. Please at least try to find the good bits.


Amaranth feedback - Tomtomrawr - 10-23-2009

There is very little detail in it. Why did she head to Freeport 4? Where was she actually when she had the dream? What made her so special as to have the dream?

Work on giving more details, readers love details.