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Boss' Story Feedback - Boss - 11-04-2009
-These ones suck-
The Impersistence of Memory
Oh the joys of life in a donut
Fate of a Dream
Of a Toaster
The story of a toaster
Pursuit of a Dream
Avenger's Flight (Not -horrible-, actually)
Transmission to the 522nd
Life Lies Dreaming (*headdesk*)
Vindication (another headdesk)
Phedrin Maltak
-Everything below this is halfway decent-
LNS-Reliant
Retaliation
Finding Self
Transmission to: Liberty Naval Admiralty
Lost Precinct
Not Alone
LPI vs LN
Chains of Command
Insanity
Heavy Metal
Jennifer Government's Wedding
Demise
System of a Lockdown
I wish I didn't feel the things I do
By Leaps and Bounds
-Thread updated for all my stories-
Updated 12/20/2010
Boss' Story Feedback - kikatsu - 11-04-2009
Well I rather liked it, it was odd though, I have not seen many stories written in short little bursts like that, but I rather like how you did it...breaks it into easy to process pieces.
The story itself is rather straight forward, but slightly comical for some reason...
Probably how it is written from Jim's POV and has his words an opinions there, I like that you did that.
and jeez...that must be some awful stress (and eating habits)...I think that guy gained five and a half pounds a day for two weeks
he's in a tough spot, I have to wish him luck
Boss' Story Feedback - Boss - 11-04-2009
Buckle those seat belts, kids. The ride's just starting.
Boss' Story Feedback - Boss - 11-10-2009
Bump. Added links to all of my stories.
Boss' Story Feedback - Boss - 11-17-2009
I'm still working on Chains. Note that this thread is linked in both my sig pic and the link below it.
Boss' Story Feedback - Nathan - 11-18-2009
Love them all you need to teach me how to be one with the RP. I do try guys XD
Boss' Story Feedback - Boss - 12-09-2009
*cough*bump*cough*
Added to both Chains and Insanity
Boss' Story Feedback - Glis - 02-21-2010
I really like the LPI vs LN story though nowadays it's not like that anymore we are a bit, well hostile i guess, with each other (i'm LN) but most of the time we're pretty friendly.
Boss' Story Feedback - Boss - 02-21-2010
Yeah. That one's old, and was spurred by an indie LN gunboat. Resolved now, thank God.
Boss' Story Feedback - Boss - 04-24-2010
Slightly epic gravedig for Jennifer Government's Wedding, Demise, and I finished Chains some time ago.