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Robert Steele Feedback - Bobthemanofsteel - 11-26-2009
Story
Hmm, someone was watching Sin City the other day, possibly why this is an internal monologue ;D
Critisim, feedback, whatever. NAU.
Oh yeah, and it'll be on going, so don't say 'OMG ITZ 2 SHRT GET 4 LIFE!!!111one'
Robert Steele Feedback - Barrier - 11-26-2009
I like the start. Your story is one of those rare stories that seems to have something in it that makes me want to read more of it, and I do read a lot of other things that don't bring that feeling to me:laugh:
Robert Steele Feedback - Bobthemanofsteel - 11-27-2009
Heh, why thanks.
And that comment's got me in the mood to finish the second part.
Oh, plus the server's down:P