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Mr.Fabulous' (leonardo_tigre) feedback thread - Mr.Fabulous - 04-16-2010 Hello, and welcome to my feedback thread! It sure's been awhile since I dusted off this thread's cobwebs! A lot has changed since then... But in any case, I would love to know your thoughts on what you think about my roleplay, story-crafting and even PvPability! Below is listed the characters I play as, the ships that they own and/or fly in, and the stories/events that link or involve them, directly, or indirectly! Why not leave a comment below on your experience with them? >>>
>>> 1. Character Sheet: (picture)
2. Factions Involved:
<<<unknown>>> 3. Summary: Born in Planet Leeds, a planet so smog-choked that its populace dared not move around save inside either pressurized suits or through long glass hallways, his father gave him the name 'Leon' while his mother gave him 'Fabulous': the former to signify bravery and nobility and the latter to encourage flamboyance and artistic expressiveness. Growing up in a quaint and simple household alongside two other siblings: Delilah, his older sister, and Harry, his younger brother, Fabulous would ironically prove to be the opposite of both his names in his childhood years, being the shyer and more reserved of the three. All of them did however have a fascination for nature that further magnified when his family had saved enough to move to Planet Cambridge in 812 A.S. Not as zealous in his desire to safeguard Bretonia's last remaining natural wonders as his younger brother, Fabulous still looked at nature with awe and wonder, filling his younger years with days of leaving the house either on his own or with his siblings to simply taking in the sights and sounds of the forests and shores near his house. Fabulous' life changed when in 817 A.S., the Kusarians broke through the Bretonian defenses and were at Bretonia's doorstep. Finding his home planet under threat, the once-shy middle child and his siblings were inspired to action. While Delilah worked diligently towards the Armed Forces and Harry took to the more extremist route of joining the Gaians, Fabulous began taking his secondary and tertiary studies more seriously, creatively expressing himself more through holosculpting, dancing and martial arts, and networking with all sorts of gentleman clubs to take up action and establish several trade networks to help in the war effort. Alas, their hopes were shattered when in 819 A.S., Gallic forces managed to successfully occupy the Edinburgh system, with Harry perishing in its defense. The youngest of the trio now dead, Delilah instead opted for the safer route towards the BPA, while Fabulous took to the lanes and became a freelance trader, only able to look in horror as Gallia occupied Leeds. One day, in 824 A.S., Fabulous chanced upon this ex-Orbital Spa & Cruise executive, Jaden Armand, who saw in him the potential for greatness. Fabulous and Jaden decided upon a subtle partnership, the latter acting as both advisor and mentor while the former gathered his networks, and began to establish the first iterations of an eco-tourism company that would later come to be known as Golden Oak Tours. Now, guided by the renewed hope of inspiring the hearts of Sirius into action against both the invading Gallics and those that would seek to tarnish the galaxy's natural beauty for selfish gain, it remains to be seen whether Fabulous, and Golden Oak Tours, will succeed in their goals, and bring about a new age of a greener, cleaner Sirius. 4. List of RP Stories Involved In: The Messiah of Gaia (still to be made) <<< GOAT.Nobleman.Leon.2 - "Serenity" Nobleman-class Transport GOAT.Gentleman.Leon - "Kestrel" Gentleman-class Freighter GOAT.Dragoon.Leon - "Ahoudori" Dragoon-class Gunboat GOAT.Cavalier.Leon - "Jackdaw" Civilian Heavy Fighter
>>> 1. Character Sheet: ![]()
2. Factions Involved: ![]() ::::: Imperio del Corsario ::::: >>> Scout <<<
![]() ::::: Bounty Hunters Guild ::::: >>> Sidewinder <<<
::::: Freelancer :::::
>>> Light Fighter Pilot <<<
819 A.S., April 30 >>> Inquiry for Garanchou ![]() ::::: Orbital Spa and Cruise ::::: >>> Shipmaster <<< 3. Summary: Born in the barely arable, ashen and volcanic, and artifact-littered Planet Crete, Jaden Armand was the only child of Kamos and Rosanna Armand, the latter having died at childbirth due to her mother's poor health. Kamos was the owner of his own artifact mine, but his rule was fair and compassionate, and Jaden learned many of her values from how her father treated his subordinates. Despite this, the mining business was always dangerous, where not only cave-ins, but also ancient traps were a common hazard. and Jaden took it upon herself to find a way to ease her people's plight. As Jaden grew older, her father's mine grew in size and scope. This allowed the Armand family to afford things like an indoor swimming pool, a hobby that Jaden grew fond of, in addition to various other luxuries from Orbital Spa and Cruise. To herself, she hoped that one day she would be able to afford herself and her father enough for them both to fly around in comfort and luxury. However, it also attracted competition. Several owners of the other artifact mines were obvious in their jealousy in Kamos' progress with his mine, and a few times the workers between his mine and the others would come to blows over ownership of particular mining sites. He warned Jaden that she'd have to stay strong in case anything bad might happen to him. When Jaden was of age, she took on the Malvada Cloud Trial, and came back successful to a father who had just finished setting up her first Centurion. But before they could celebrate came news of a massive Outcast force headed towards Omicron Gamma. Jaden hadn't time to train with marksmanship, so her father co-piloted the vessel, while she handled the controls. The battle quickly turned ugly and when her vessel got shot, exploding the seat behind her and killing her father, she panicked and fled back to Crete to the nearest hospital. Unfortunately, he died from massive burns and internal bleeding. But as Jaden wept by her father's bedside, her mine was attacked by her father's rivals, and everyone there perished. Losing her main means of livelihood, and branded an 'Untouchable' for having fled the battle, Jaden was forced to sell her house and live off the streets. Beaten and raped many times, she realized she was infertile from the fact she never got pregnant from any of the incidents, the reason she would much later find out being the radiation from the Malvada Cloud Trials. Using that, she turned towards prostitution for a time, circumventing her 'Untouchable' status from the fact she was infertile. One day, Jaden met Salvador Giovanni, the leader of a small community of Untouchables who still willingly served the Empire, and she joined without hesitation. As the community grew, so too did Jaden's relationship with Salvador, and she became the community's 'mother' somewhat. Unfortunately, there were those in the Empire that didn't want these Untouchables to grow influential, so they betrayed the community to the Bounty Hunters Guild. Jaden, Salvador, and many other Untouchables were ambushed in Omicron Kappa. When Jaden's Centurion was crippled, a shrapnel destroying her left eye, Salvador sacrificed himself to save her by tractoring in her pod, then jettisoning her off into the vastness of space. Months later, her pod would be found in Omicron Delta by another Bounty Hunters Guild member named Felix Gullington. Felix took her in, nursed her back to health, and despite her Corsair origins Jaden was offered a position to be one of Felix's wingmates, something Jaden thought was uncharacteristic of a BHG member, which later he would admit the real reason was that he had fallen for her at first sight. Felix helped teach Jaden a lot of things and cleared up various misconceptions she had of the rest of Sirius, and slowly Jaden developed feelings for him. However, Felix had an ex-girlfriend, Alyssia Bagginsons, another BHG member who couldn't bear the thought of breaking up with him despite his constant rebukes. When she caught wind of Felix's new lover, she went ballistic and plotted for the couple's demise. She rallied other Corsair-haters within the guild and set up a trap for the two at an abandoned, to-be-scrapped space station, under the guise that a top-tier criminal boss was there in hiding. Tricked, and then trapped alongside a timed bomb in the station, Felix was forced to stay behind in the control room to rewire enough time for the blast doors to stay open while Jaden escaped. However, Felix timed one blast door wrongly, causing it to close prematurely and snapped Jaden's left leg clean off, and she had to use a nearby blowtorch to cauterize the wound. Escaping in Felix's ship, Jaden looked back to only see Felix's final goodbye consumed in the bomb's blast, destroying the entire station. After tending her amputation in a hospital, Jaden vowed to get back at Alyssia for her transgressions. For a month, Jaden plotted on how to eliminate Alyssia, until a window of opportunity presented itself in the form of her target taking a break in Planet Curacao. Jaden flew her ship over to Alyssia's window as she was changing, and then unloaded the ship's entire arsenal upon the room, eliminating her for good. After fleeing from the authorities, Jaden went back to the station's debris field, and deposited a pod containing a cryogenically-stored bouquet of roses, and a written farewell to the man she loved and lost. For a couple of years, she roamed Sirius as a Freelancer for hire, mainly as a light fighter scout, and occasionally as a prostitute. The loss of two lovers had scarred her greatly, so her methods were cold and calculating. One day, she met a trader named Travis Zidane who was not only impressed by her skills as a scout, but also by her skills at the bedroom, and offered her a position in his small band of smugglers. With heavy reluctance, she took on the job of escorting him through some of the most dangerous routes in Sirius, and 'escorting' him whenever he needed it. Travis quickly developed a soft spot for the hardened ice queen, and did all sorts and manner of means of showing just how much he wanted to see Jaden smile again over the years, ranging from the diarrhea-inducing, to the outright craziest schemes. Slowly, he managed to get through to her, and soon Jaden was impressed by his dedication and tenacity, and found enough courage to smile and learn to love again. However, a large family of Outcasts had been tracking the smuggler band for many months, figuring out the perfect time for them to strike. That time came when the band were heading through Sigma-13, through a remote part of the nebula towards a jump hole. The Outcasts ambushed them hard: a fleet of two gunboats and almost a dozen wing of fighters surrounded the convoy. Jaden did her best to fend off as many as she could, but two lucky missiles from the gunboats deshielded her vessel, then crippled it, exploding her console and severely charring her left arm before she could jettison. In a desperate effort, Travis tractored in her pod alongside the other smuggler pilots, then fired them off at the escaping escorts for them to tractor in, promising to Jaden that as soon as he's shaken off the Outcasts, he'll return to her. Jaden watched helplessly as the Outcasts focus-fired on Travis' freighter, the only remaining smuggling vessel, until the sortie disappeared into the clouds. As Jaden was recovering, a Gas Miners' Guild pilot came to tell her that Travis didn't make it. In disbelief, Jaden flew back to one of the Gas Miner Stations nearest where the event took place to ask around. Rumor has it the Outcasts caught and beheaded him in a very gruesome fashion. Devastated by the news, Jaden went into isolation. The next time she's heard from is as the security officer onboard a Borderworlds Transport, for a trader named Leonardo Tigre. The two didn't get along very well, and eventually Jaden went with another Freelancer named David Gee. He took her with her back to his secret island-estate in Planet New Tokyo, where she would live there alongside him relatively-peacefully, while she would from time-to-time venture out and do her usual thing of scouting and 'escorting'. Despite her better judgement, Jaden developed some feelings for David, who didn't exactly reciprocate the feelings, but wasn't against them either. One day, two mysterious pilots equipped with advanced weaponry and equipment invaded the island-estate, as vengeance from David Gee for having tried to allegedly-eliminate Leonardo Tigre. 4. List of RP Stories Involved In: The Barrenness of Gaia (still to be made) <<< Principe.de.Jade - "Garanchou" GMG freighter
>>> 1. Character Sheet: ![]()
2. Factions Involved: ![]() ::::: Samura Industries ::::: >>> Engineering Scientist <<<
![]() ::::: Kusari State Police ::::: >>> Junsa-Bucho <<<
![]() ::::: Blood Dragons ::::: >>> Sougou-Kantai Gensui <<<
![]() ::::: Blood Ronin ::::: >>> Sougou-Kantai Gensui <<< The Way of the Blood Ronin: an indie RP ::: Feedback
825AS-0802-1924 >>> TO: Council of Freeports 825AS-0803-0251 >>> TO: Ingenuus Research Group 825AS-0804-0015 >>> TO: Ingenuus Research Group 825AS-0807-0034 >>> TO: Various Zoner Groups 825AS-0807-0105 >>> TO: Various Zoner Groups 825AS-0807-0136 >>> TO: Various Zoner Groups 3. Summary: Born at Planet Kyushu, Tamiya was the eighth and youngest son of the late Tamo and Saichi Dachiko. Tamo was an astroflight school teacher while Saichi was a farmer. Notably, Tamiya was the only child who didn't start through a life of crime. When Tamiya came of age he worked for Kishiro as an engineering scientist for Samura on Yokohama Shipyard, while the rest of his siblings were criminals. Two of them became Farmers' Alliance cronies, four went with Hogosha, while one of them killed Tamiya's parents in a sadistic initiation. Furious, Tamiya applied for the KSP, vowing to apprehend his malicious brothers and sisters. Three of them were apprehended in his term before the Bret-Kus war, but the other four he couldn't touch since they were under Hogosha's protection. A Blood Dragon cruiser captain, Kicho Kazushi, contacted Tamiya, and asked if he and Tamiya could secretly work together in taking down Hogosha. Tamiya agreed, and by the establishment of the Republic of Kusari, Tamiya and Kicho managed to down two of the Hogoshan crime lords. During his time in the KSP, on one raid against the Hogoshans he managed to rescue some enslaved prostitutes. While most of the others were able to reunite with their families, one in particular was Sachiko, a girl five years his junior. She lost her surname because she was wrongly implicated in a crime involving her family, and was thus disowned and then sold off to the Hogoshans. Fearing her lack of surname would make her illegible to a normal Kusarian life, Tamiya chose to adopt, and later marry her, yielding an only son they named Tamiya Jr. She and their son live in a rural farmstead in Kyushu, away from the One day, the crew of Kicho's cruiser contacted Tamiya, saying that Kicho had been assassinated by Hogosha. They told him that in Kicho's will, that the command of the Chin.Chou be handed down to Tamiya, in exchange that he apply for the Blood Dragons, figuring he would do more good with them than through the thumb of the Kusarian government and of Samura. Once there, he was quickly appointed the head of the Kazushi clan, a clan of space-faring Blood Dragons that lived within their ships like the Zoners, and changed his surname to Kazushi-Dachiko. Using the clan's assets, he organized daring raids against the Gallic forces and Hogoshans alike, while also using and tipping off his contacts in the KSP to hunt down the latter. While he wasn't favored with the Dragon Shogun for his cool loyalty to him, he was popular among his clan and fellow dragons for his patient, fatherly disposition. It was also through his time in the Blood Dragons that, without the restraints of the KSP, he's been able to apprehend one of his two remaining siblings, but not without a hard fight, and nearly getting caught by lawful forces, saved only by a previous colleague of his in the force. However, the longer Tamiya lingered among the Blood Dragons, the clearer it was to him that the seeds of civil war among the clans were sprouting up. Hoping to abate the chaos peacefully, he conducted numerous secret meetings among the clans, identifying those likely to dissent, then persuading them to join the Kazushi and make plans to flee, rather than break out in fighting. Initially planning to either capture the Battleship Matsumoto for their own use or to create their own Togo-class battleship, the impatience of the dissenters forced Tamiya into the crazy plan of jump-starting an already-existing Togo, and then fleeing with that instead. After weeks of scheming and planning, Tamiya and the united forces of the Kazushi and the rest of the dissenting clans managed to hijack the relic Togo, the Aokigahara, without a single drop of dragon blood. By the time the dragons had realized the Togo was missing, the fleeing exiles, who've deemed themselves the Blood Ronin, had already an hour's distance between them. Now, Tamiya and the rest of the Blood Ronin, a total population of 50,000 crew, their partners, their children and their other relatives cramped into every inch of the Battleship Aokigahara, take to the stars in search of a new meaning for themselves, hoping to one day find a planet to settle and create the first ever generation of Blood Dragons not locked in a hopeless war against Kusari. 4. List of RP Stories Involved In: Tamiya Logs (still to be made)
>>> 1. Character Sheet:
2. Factions Involved: ![]() ::::: Liberty Navy Primary Fleet ::::: >>> Admiral <<<
![]() ::::: Liberty Navy Texas Armada, 46th Fleet ::::: >>> Fleet Admiral <<<
![]() ::::: Liberty Navy External Security & Research Division ::::: >>> Special Agent-In-Charge <<< 3. Summary: (still to be made) 4. List of RP Stories Involved In: Fermi Paradox <<<
>>> 1. Character Sheet: (picture)
2. Factions Involved: ![]() ::::: Kusari Naval Forces ::::: >>> Jyunshou <<< Official Ship Database Koba Battlegroup Message Dump 3. Summary: Born in 792 A.S., Suzuran was named by his mother after the flower his father gave her nine months before his birth. Because his father and mother both served in the Kusari Naval Forces, Suzuran and his three younger triplet sisters, namely Suzuka, Sukaku, and Sumiku, were being groomed to be proper and honorable officers. His life changed when during the Nomad Wars, his father had perished during the sudden Blood Dragon attack on the Tohoku Planetary Arch. Left with a grieving mother and three distraught sisters, Suzuran had to become the man of the household to keep things from falling apart just long enough for his mother to return to active service. From then on, he (and his sisters indirectly) vowed to right the wrongs the Blood Dragons wrought upon his family. Suzuran's first chance to prove himself was during the Bretonia-Kusari war. Fresh out of the academies as four gunboat captains, Suzuran and his siblings struck fear into the Bretonian supply lines toward Planet Harris, then also served faithfully in the defense of the republic. His branch recognized the siblings' cohesiveness and sent them up the ranks, until eventually Suzuran ranked as a Jyunshou, or Commodore, of his own attack force, his three siblings each commanding their own capital ship: - Suzuka the tigress, in command of the battleship 'Kobakage',
- Sukaku the turtle, leading the battlecruiser 'Kobayashi', - and Sumiku the phoenix, captaining the destroyer 'Kobanagi'. These days, the Koba battlegroup mainly focuses on the defense of Planet Tomioka, taking the fight directly to the Blood Dragons. But with the rising tensions in Sigma-21, Suzuran and his siblings faithfully redirect to Planet Saigon while aiding the Kusari State Police on the side against the Dragons, Chrysanthemums and pirates alike. Only time will tell when they'll finally be called to take arms against the Blood Dragons once more. 4. List of RP Stories Involved In: The Four Guardians of Kusari <<< IKN.CC-Kobayashi.3 - "Komainu" Kusari Battlecruiser IKN.DD-Kobanagi - "Takeda" Kusari Destroyer >>> Tigre Family Series Feedback - Mr.Fabulous - 08-25-2010 This area shall contain my old RP. (picture)
1. Character Sheet
2. Factions Involved in (chronological) ![]() ::::: Liberty Navy Primary Fleet ::::: >>> Captain <<<
3. List of Ships 4. Details: (still to be made) ![]() 1. Character Sheet
2. Factions Involved in (chronological) ![]() ::::: Liberty Navy Primary Fleet ::::: >>> Admiral <<<
3. List of Ships 4. Details: (still to be made) [LN]-Harriet,Fieldson - "Liberator" LF [LN]-Harriet;Fieldson - "Upholder" Bomber [LN]-LNS-Florida.Keys - Liberty "Griffin"-class BS (picture)
1. Character Sheet
2. Factions Involved in (chronological) ![]() ::::: Kusari State Police ::::: >>> Junsa <<<
3. List of Ships 4. Details: (still to be made) [KSP]Uzumaki.K[Junsa] - "Wyrm" LF (picture)
1. Character Sheet
2. Factions Involved in (chronological) ![]() ::::: Imperio del Corsario ::::: >>> Scout <<<
![]() ::::: Bounty Hunters Guild ::::: >>> Sidewinder <<<
::::: Freelancer :::::
>>> Light Fighter Pilot <<<
![]() ::::: Orbital Spa and Cruise ::::: >>> Shipmaster <<<
3. List of Ships 4. Details: Born in the barely arable, ashen and volcanic, and artifact-littered Planet Crete, Jaden Armand was the only child of Kamos and Rosanna Armand, the latter having died at childbirth due to her mother's poor health. Kamos was the owner of his own artifact mine, but his rule was fair and compassionate, and Jaden learned many of her values from how her father treated his subordinates. Despite this, the mining business was always dangerous, where not only cave-ins, but also ancient traps were a common hazard. and Jaden took it upon herself to find a way to ease her people's plight. As Jaden grew older, her father's mine grew in size and scope. This allowed the Armand family to afford things like an indoor swimming pool, a hobby that Jaden grew fond of, in addition to various other luxuries from Orbital Spa and Cruise. To herself, she hoped that one day she would be able to afford herself and her father enough for them both to fly around in comfort and luxury. However, it also attracted competition. Several owners of the other artifact mines were obvious in their jealousy in Kamos' progress with his mine, and a few times the workers between his mine and the others would come to blows over ownership of particular mining sites. He warned Jaden that she'd have to stay strong in case anything bad might happen to him. When Jaden was of age, she took on the Malvada Cloud Trial, and came back successful to a father who had just finished setting up her first Centurion. But before they could celebrate came news of a massive Outcast force headed towards Omicron Gamma. Jaden hadn't time to train with marksmanship, so her father co-piloted the vessel, while she handled the controls. The battle quickly turned ugly and when her vessel got shot, exploding the seat behind her and killing her father, she panicked and fled back to Crete to the nearest hospital. Unfortunately, he died from massive burns and internal bleeding. But as Jaden wept by her father's bedside, her mine was attacked by her father's rivals, and everyone there perished. Losing her main means of livelihood, and branded an 'Untouchable' for having fled the battle, Jaden was forced to sell her house and live off the streets. Beaten and raped many times, she realized she was infertile from the fact she never got pregnant from any of the incidents, the reason she would much later find out being the radiation from the Malvada Cloud Trials. Using that, she turned towards prostitution for a time, circumventing her 'Untouchable' status from the fact she was infertile. One day, Jaden met Salvador Giovanni, the leader of a small community of Untouchables who still willingly served the Empire, and she joined without hesitation. As the community grew, so too did Jaden's relationship with Salvador, and she became the community's 'mother' somewhat. Unfortunately, there were those in the Empire that didn't want these Untouchables to grow influential, so they betrayed the community to the Bounty Hunters Guild. Jaden, Salvador, and many other Untouchables were ambushed in Omicron Kappa. When Jaden's Centurion was crippled, a shrapnel destroying her left eye, Salvador sacrificed himself to save her by tractoring in her pod, then jettisoning her off into the vastness of space. Months later, her pod would be found in Omicron Delta by another Bounty Hunters Guild member named Felix Gullington. Felix took her in, nursed her back to health, and despite her Corsair origins Jaden was offered a position to be one of Felix's wingmates, something Jaden thought was uncharacteristic of a BHG member, which later he would admit the real reason was that he had fallen for her at first sight. Felix helped teach Jaden a lot of things and cleared up various misconceptions she had of the rest of Sirius, and slowly Jaden developed feelings for him. However, Felix had an ex-girlfriend, Alyssia Bagginsons, another BHG member who couldn't bear the thought of breaking up with him despite his constant rebukes. When she caught wind of Felix's new lover, she went ballistic and plotted for the couple's demise. She rallied other Corsair-haters within the guild and set up a trap for the two at an abandoned, to-be-scrapped space station, under the guise that a top-tier criminal boss was there in hiding. Tricked, and then trapped alongside a timed bomb in the station, Felix was forced to stay behind in the control room to rewire enough time for the blast doors to stay open while Jaden escaped. However, Felix timed one blast door wrongly, causing it to close prematurely and snapped Jaden's left leg clean off, and she had to use a nearby blowtorch to cauterize the wound. Escaping in Felix's ship, Jaden looked back to only see Felix's final goodbye consumed in the bomb's blast, destroying the entire station. After tending her amputation in a hospital, Jaden vowed to get back at Alyssia for her transgressions. For a month, Jaden plotted on how to eliminate Alyssia, until a window of opportunity presented itself in the form of her target taking a break in Planet Curacao. Jaden flew her ship over to Alyssia's window as she was changing, and then unloaded the ship's entire arsenal upon the room, eliminating her for good. After fleeing from the authorities, Jaden went back to the station's debris field, and deposited a pod containing a cryogenically-stored bouquet of roses, and a written farewell to the man she loved and lost. For a couple of years, she roamed Sirius as a Freelancer for hire, mainly as a light fighter scout, and occasionally as a prostitute. The loss of two lovers had scarred her greatly, so her methods were cold and calculating. One day, she met a trader named Travis Zidane who was not only impressed by her skills as a scout, but also by her skills at the bedroom, and offered her a position in his small band of smugglers. With heavy reluctance, she took on the job of escorting him through some of the most dangerous routes in Sirius, and 'escorting' him whenever he needed it. Travis quickly developed a soft spot for the hardened ice queen, and did all sorts and manner of means of showing just how much he wanted to see Jaden smile again over the years, ranging from the diarrhea-inducing, to the outright craziest schemes. Slowly, he managed to get through to her, and soon Jaden was impressed by his dedication and tenacity, and found enough courage to smile and learn to love again. However, a large family of Outcasts had been tracking the smuggler band for many months, figuring out the perfect time for them to strike. That time came when the band were heading through Sigma-13, through a remote part of the nebula towards a jump hole. The Outcasts ambushed them hard: a fleet of two gunboats and almost a dozen wing of fighters surrounded the convoy. Jaden did her best to fend off as many as she could, but two lucky missiles from the gunboats deshielded her vessel, then crippled it, exploding her console and severely charring her left arm before she could jettison. In a desperate effort, Travis tractored in her pod alongside the other smuggler pilots, then fired them off at the escaping escorts for them to tractor in, promising to Jaden that as soon as he's shaken off the Outcasts, he'll return to her. Jaden watched helplessly as the Outcasts focus-fired on Travis' freighter, the only remaining smuggling vessel, until the sortie disappeared into the clouds. As Jaden was recovering, a Gas Miners' Guild pilot came to tell her that Travis didn't make it. In disbelief, Jaden flew back to one of the Gas Miner Stations nearest where the event took place to ask around. Rumor has it the Outcasts caught and beheaded him in a very gruesome fashion. Devastated by the news, Jaden went into isolation. The next time she's heard from is as the security officer onboard a Borderworlds Transport, for a trader named Leonardo Tigre. The two didn't get along very well, and eventually Jaden went with another Freelancer named David Gee. He took her with her back to his secret island-estate in Planet New Tokyo, where she would live there alongside him relatively-peacefully, while she would from time-to-time venture out and do her usual thing of scouting and 'escorting'. Despite her better judgement, Jaden developed some feelings for David, who didn't exactly reciprocate the feelings, but wasn't against them either. One day, two mysterious pilots equipped with advanced weaponry and equipment invaded the island-estate, as vengeance from David Gee for having tried to allegedly-eliminate Leonardo Tigre. (still in progress) Dragon.Slayer - "Garanchou" Fr OSC|Garden.of.Eden - "Enterprise" Liner ![]() 1. Character Sheet
2. Factions Involved in (chronological) ![]() ::::: Samura Industries ::::: >>> Engineering Scientist <<<
![]() ::::: Kusari State Police ::::: >>> Junsa-Bucho <<<
![]() ::::: Blood Dragons ::::: >>> Recruit <<<
3. List of Ships 4. Details: Born at Planet Kyushu, Tamiya was the eighth and youngest son of the late Tamo and Saichi Dachiko. Tamo was an astroflight school teacher while Saichi was a farmer. Notably, Tamiya was the only child who didn't start through a life of crime. When Tamiya came of age he worked for Kishiro as an engineering scientist for Samura on Yokohama Shipyard, while the rest of his siblings were criminals. Two of them became Farmers' Alliance cronies, four went with Hogosha, while one of them killed Tamiya's parents in a sadistic initiation. Furious, Tamiya applied for the KSP, vowing to apprehend his malicious brothers and sisters. Three of them were apprehended in his term before the Bret-Kus war, but the other four he couldn't touch since they were under Hogosha's protection. A Blood Dragon cruiser captain, Kicho Kazushi, contacted Tamiya, and asked if he and Tamiya could secretly work together in taking down Hogosha. Tamiya agreed, and by the establishment of the Republic of Kusari, Tamiya and Kicho managed to down two of the Hogoshan crime lords. One day, the crew of Kicho's cruiser contacted Tamiya, saying that Kicho had been assassinated by Hogosha. They told him that in Kicho's will, that the command of the Chin.Chou be handed down to Tamiya, in exchange that Tamiya apply for the Blood Dragons, figuring he would do more good with them than through the thumb of the Kusarian government and of Samura. Chin.Chou - "Kagutsuchi" Cu Quote: Quote:---------------------------------------- RE: leonardo_tigre's feedback thread - Mr.Fabulous - 09-26-2016 Here is where the details of the RP for various stories are placed.. The Way of the Blood Ronin: an indie RP
[click the link for the story] I was hoping to make this BD| story before my hiatus, but because of IRL obligations pulling yours-truly from doing so and the state of the old BD| having kicked the bucket, yeah... Constructive comments, especially on writing ability, narrative consistency, and potential plot holes, would be well-appreciated! Ranks within the Kazushi Clan:
^ I actually had to have reddit help me with the ranks: https://www.reddit.com/r/translator/comments/68f9r3/english_japanese_custom_ranks_into_japanese/ RE: leonardo_tigre's feedback thread - Mr.Fabulous - 08-14-2018 BUMP I'm surprised I've yet to receive any feedback after all these years! Won't thee please help a veteran improve? |