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Feedbackzz - r3vange - 03-31-2011
The story can be found here
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...91398&st=10
So you know the drill
Hatan
Recommendan
Lovan
Flaman
Critican
Feedbackzz - Veygaar - 04-03-2011
Nice graphics mate, twas enjoyable to read. Will you let others ingame effect your story much??
Feedbackzz - VoluptaBox - 04-03-2011
Constructive criticism: write less, hurts my eyes
![[Image: emoticon-00126-nerd.gif]](http://www.skype-emoticons.com/images/emoticon-00126-nerd.gif)
Feedbackzz - r3vange - 04-03-2011
' Wrote:Nice graphics mate, twas enjoyable to read. Will you let others ingame effect your story much??
This was more of a test RP, to test how I can combine visuall and text elements toghter, the second part will be the one with the interactions.
@Rogue noted
Feedbackzz - Implosion - 04-20-2011
A movie.
Make it now.
Feedbackzz - Primitive - 04-20-2011
I can't be bothered to read. But I absolutely love graphics in the story.
Feedbackzz - michiyl - 04-20-2011
I'll read the text later, after I'm finished staring at and drooling from your pictures:D
Feedbackzz - r3vange - 05-12-2011
' Wrote:A movie.
Make it now.
There will be one but for a different rp story (nerdyskypesmiley)