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I wont say Goodbye - Jeremy Hunter - 04-12-2011
This is not for Running from Nightfall, its for I won't say Goodbye. Do not give me feedback on Jeremy
Link to Story
So, im making the background for my Navy char, so please tell me how I'm doing so far.
Tips, suggestions, etc appreciated.
Criticism welcome.
Flaming, trolling, etc not welcome.
So yeah.
Have at it.
-Jeremy
I wont say Goodbye - VoluptaBox - 04-12-2011
At first I thought it was another leaving thread...
As for the story itself, I hate giving feedback on that kind of stuff. Just do whatever the hell makes you happy. That's good roleplay 8-|
I wont say Goodbye - Jeremy Hunter - 04-12-2011
' Wrote:At first I thought it was another leaving thread...
As for the story itself, I hate giving feedback on that kind of stuff. Just do whatever the hell makes you happy. That's good roleplay 8-|
Heh, didnt think of that.
No prob.
I just want to know how my writing is and stuff.
Also any holes in the roleplay.
-Jeremy
I wont say Goodbye - Jeremy Hunter - 05-04-2011
Oops, forgot to bump.
Ba-da-bump. How,am I doin' with Alexis?
I wont say Goodbye - Jeremy Hunter - 05-19-2011
And added more...read n review pl0x!
And it will get worse...