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Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 07-25-2011
Greetings all
These research logs are my very first attempt at an RP story so please forgive me if they make you cringe a bit. Anyway, any constructive criticism the community can give me?
Research into the Kansas sector
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...;hl
Research on the Privas cluster
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...;hl
I know neither of these is spectacularly original, xenoarcheology, Daam K'Vosh planetary engineering and all that. But these are both part of my "grand plan" and I think the end product will be worth the back story. I hope anyway.
Also, if anyone has run into me in-game feedback would be appreciated on that as well.
Jack Denton
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 08-01-2011
My latest creation.
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=105218&hl
Please give me some feedback!
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Kiith - 08-01-2011
I have to say that your forum RP is very good, interesting and logically.
I didn't meet you ingame yet, but from that what I've seen I would say thumbs up for you^^
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 08-01-2011
Thanks, it means a lot to hear that it's not as terrible as I think. There must be something I can improve on though, any pointers?
Jack Denton's research log feedback - SA_Scavenger - 08-01-2011
Reading your "Research" is entertaining as well as informative, to a point of course. Keep it up.
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 08-01-2011
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, don't worry I intend to keep making more.
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 08-02-2011
Greetings all, this ones my first attempt at an actual story story. It's got talking and everything!
Link
Not done yet but il try and finish it tomorrow, this RP stuff is hard work:)fun though
Let me know what you think, constructive criticism is welcome especially now when it's not done, easier to make changes.
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 08-04-2011
Updated "A new ship", so far I have written the entire thing on my Ipod touch and this is the first time iv seen it on a computer screen... its a bit depressing to see it so tiny.
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 08-05-2011
Another couple of updates to "A new ship"
Any constructive criticism?
Link
Jack Denton's research log feedback - Zeppy - 08-06-2011
Finished "A new ship", I will probably go edit it later but at the moment it's to late and I need sleep.
The usual drill, constructive criticism is welcome and activly encouraged! (makes me feel weird when no one tells me that something sucks)