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The Untold Feedback - Domjan - 08-10-2011
This is my story about a man unknown to the world and himself, I'm
trying to get the whole story interesting for readers so please tell me if it is so:
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=106026
I'll also try and put some more interesting stuff like his space album and such.
This story is unfinished and I will leave it like that,
as I have no more motivation to complete my character,
I have in mind another one.
The Untold Feedback - Madvillain - 08-13-2011
looks alright!