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ZOIA's feedback - Chev - 11-16-2011
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ZOIA is watching you.
LINK TO THE STORY: http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?ac...=0#entry1598861
Okay, let's start a bit from the beginning. What the heck is ZOIA? Well, first of all, for the very first time she was represented here: http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=95882 and here: http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...327&hl=ZOIA
But if you're too lazy, I'll make an small explanation and a bit of summary of plot of the story.
ZOIA is the creation of doctor Danielius Baltakis (Daniel Whiteyes in English. Danielius has Lithuanian blood, his family keeps old Lithuanian customs from generation to generation).
ZOIA's purpose - being a core of scientific space vessel. Being the one and only crew member of the entire ship. Being the ship itself...
Baltakis wants to create the first artificial vessel core of this kind. However, he creates something much more... something much more emotional and menacing in the same time.
The whole story is represented from the sight of ZOIA.
The first chapter is not very big, however, I like when everything is tidy (except my grammar) and small texts are fine.
Oh, and before you say something, I know that it looks familiar to GLADOS and HAL. This story have been influenced by them.