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101st Faction Status Review - Eppy - 04-06-2008

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[101st] Outcast Guard
The Ghosts of Razgriz


Quote:
Live In truth
Have Faith
Repent Of Sin
Give Proof of Humility
Love Justice
Be Merciful
Be Sincere
Endure Persecution

The Knights of the Order of St. John of Jerusalem, Ancient Terra

Vive segun la verdad
Ten Fe
Arrepientete de tus pecados
Da prueba de humildad
Ama la justicia
Se Piadoso
Se sincero
Resiste la persecucion

Los caballeros de la Orden de San Juan de Jerusalem, Tierra Antigua.

[font=Monotype Corsiva]Our ID is Outcast. Our Tags are Outcast and Outcast Guard (Due to innate time constraints Guard tags are no longer mandatory, though pilots are suggested to make a long-term project of obtaining one at some point).

[color=#FF0000]A Brief History of Cardamine
Quote:The crippled sleeper ship Hispania arrived in Omicron Alpha almost 800 years ago. Its passengers named the planet Malta -- a harsh place of acidic oceans, gray skies, and vast plains covered in a species of tall, thin, orange grass. They later learned that the grass could be rendered into a narcotic substance, that they called Cardamine.
Eventually the Outcasts -- as they came to think of themselves -- began limited exploration of their system. As pilots wandered farther and farther afield in search of resources, many became seriously ill. Upon planetfall, the crews mysteriously recovered.
Doctors were baffled. By chance, they made a genetic scan of a critically ill pilot and made a startling discovery. His genetic codes had been altered. Outcast DNA contained strands identical to that of the orange grasses that covered the planet -- from which Cardamine was derived. Trace amounts were present in everything on the planet, from the air they breathed to the water they drank. Once pilots made lengthier journeys away from Malta, their bodies went into shock, followed by death.
The Outcasts were now truly separated from the rest of humanity -- changed so that they could never expand beyond the planet on which they had landed. They needed the Cardamine now, like air or food or water. But with the origin of the sickness solved, they could at least compensate by carrying supplies of Cardamine with them and resume their exploration of their surrounding systems.
When they encountered the rest of the Houses in the seventh century, a new strategy emerged. The Outcasts would deliver the poison that would rot the other Houses from the inside out and grow rich from the profits of their trade.
Today the Outcasts conduct a lucrative drug-smuggling operation using the network of Jump Holes to escape detection and transport their product into the heart of the House systems. The Outcasts remain relatively few in number; a crash in the birth rate seems to have been another side effect of their genetic modification.
A new development has been Cryer’s continued efforts to create a synthetic version of Cardamine that would be approved as a legal medication within Liberty. This poses a direct threat to the Outcasts' source of income. The Atka Research Station, with nearby access to Edge Nebula clouds, is the most immediate threat to the Outcasts. The location of the base within Corsair territory has brought the Outcasts into conflict with their ancient brethren.


[color=#FF0000]Our Mission
[font=monotype corsiva][color=#FF9900]We, the Hundred and First Outcast Guard, pledge our blood to defend the orange grasses of Malta and the air our children breathe. We are the ramparts upon which the hordes will fling themselves and die; we are the shield and the breastplate that protects the true Children of Hispania. We are the sword and the spear upon which our foes, the fallen children of Crete and those who cannot embrace the Orange Light, shall draw their last breaths as they slide through their hearts.

[color=#FF0000][font=Mistral]This is Our Pledge.
[font=Mistral][color=#FF9900]For The Orange Dream!


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For You See...

[color=#FF0000][font=Monotype Corsiva]We are born out of the Chasm of the Razgriz Black Hole in Omicron-85.
We are the Knights of Malta, the Guardians of Outcast Space.
We are the Ghosts of Razgriz!


[color=#FF9900][font=Monotype Corsiva]We are not human because we had been given a gift and can see further into truth than any man. Human beings are infants dabbling in the loam of an expansive ocean that stretches beyond the horizon.
The Cardamine has let us see this.


We operate on a higher order of being. Many wonder why we take life so easily. It is because life is just a dream of what it really is. What human beings cherish is an illusion;
there is no such thing as death, only change.



*****


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[font=monotype Corsiva]Allied
Reapers of Sirius [RoS], Blue Lotus Syndicate [BLS], Liberty Rogues LR, Hessian Tears [HT], Red Hessian Army [RHA], Lane Hackers LH

[font=monotype Corsiva]Friendly
Liberty Rogues, Red Hessians, Blood Dragons, Golden Chrysanthemums [GC], Lane Hackers, Mollys, Bundschuh, The Phantoms [Phantom], Hellfire Legion [HF], Union of Gold [UoG]

[font=monotype Corsiva]Neutral
The Angels, Queen Carina's Royal Fleet [QCxx), Bretonian Police Authority BPA), Nova Power Gen (NovaPG), The IND [IND], Temporary Autonomous Zoners [TAZ], Mandalorians [M], The Keepers Keepers

[font=monotype Corsiva]Unfriendly
RepEx Shipping (RepEx|), Nature's Last Hope [NLH], Jupiter Guild [\JG/], Artisan Farmers Alliance [AFA], Agnus Dei Agnus.Dei|, Orbital Power Gnomes [OPG]

[font=monotype Corsiva]Hostile
Rheinland Military [RM], Rheinland Federal Police [RFP], Kusari Naval Forces [KNF], Black Squadron Bs|, Dark Wings DW, King of Fighters [KoF], Southern Alliance [SA], Liberty Security Force =LSF=, Liberty Police, Inc. [LPI], Shadow Stalkers Organization sso|, Xeno Alliance XA-

[font=monotype Corsiva]Actively Warring
Colonial Remnant [CR], The Brotherhood [TBH], Benitez Family

[font=monotype Corsiva]At the Request of the Folks in the QCRF Evil Chat: Awesome:
The Xeno Alliance XA-

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[font=monotype corsiva]Obtaining Membership in the 101st

[color=#FF0000]If you think you have what it takes, if you think you have the skills and the honor to fly as 101st, contact one of us personally. If you do not know what characteristics we look for in our pilots then you may wish to think twice before applying. Due to a polarized conflict of interest players with Corsair characters are asked not to attempt to initiate contact.


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[font=Monotype Corsiva]Permissible Craft

[font=monotype Corsiva]Borderworlds Series X "Dagger"
Borderworlds Series CX "Scimitar"
Borderworlds Series Y "Stilletto"
Borderworlds Series Z "Saber"
Borderworlds Series ZX "Falcatta"
Borderworlds Series YX "Dromedary"
Borderworlds Series ST Transport
RA-4 Liberty Rogue Gunboat (Restricted)
13GS-1 Lane Hacker Gunship (Restricted)
RM-1 Outcast Destroyer (Restricted)
Outcast Assault Battleship (Restricted)
Outcast Dreadnought (Restricted)


[font=Monotype Corsiva]Non-Native Unique 101st Craft

[font=monotype Corsiva][66th]MNS-Perihelion: Kusari Destroyer (Acquired in 775 A.S. in a move simultaneous with the Bretonian operation to destroy a rogue Kusari admiral's small fleet, which had successfully assassinated King James XXI two days previous. Outcast Special Forces penetrated the ships outer hull and took command of her bridge, promptly turning her towards Malta before the Fantasia, then still a ship of the line in the BAF, turned her guns on the smaller craft)

[66th]MNS-Fantasia: Bretonian Battleship (Acquired as a burned-out wreck in 813 A.S. from the BAF ((very much under-the-table)) in exchange for a heavy sweep of the Omega-49 Corsair population. She was hauled back to Corsica and completely restored, a process which, in total, was approximately a sixth as expensive as shipping in the raw materials that would be required to construct a new Dreadnought or Battleship. She was originally designated as the Base of Operation for Outcast Special Forces; alas, due to extreme structural degradation the Battleship MNS Legacy had to be scrapped, and Fantasia has temporarily replaced her until the two replacements, Requiem and Longinus, can be constructed.)


[font=Monotype Corsiva]Permissible Weaponry

[font=monotype Corsiva]All Outcast-Produced Weaponry
All Explosive Ordinance
Supernova Antimatter Cannon
Mini-Razor
Civilian Shieldbusters
Weapons Dictated by Individual Roleplay



[font=Monotype Corsiva]System Policy

Omicron-85 is off-limits to any non-101st personnel, with the following exceptions and conditions:
  • Reapers of Sirius and Blue Lotus Syndicate craft are granted access to Omicron-85, excepting Corsica. All Capital Ships should remain out of Omicron-85 without providing 24 hours prior notice to the 101st, who must authorize the procedure. Escorts may be present.
  • Independent Outcasts in fighters or lower are granted access to Omicron-85, excepting Corsica.
  • IND are to be granted full access to Omicron-85, excepting Corsica, whom they should be under escort to dock with. Thank you for the flowers, Mr. Simon.
  • Independent transports should not be within Omicron-85.
    <div align="center]All purchases of capital ships in Omicron-85 are hence subject to evaluation by the 101st and are likely to be reclaimed.
[font=Monotype Corsiva]The Ghosts of Razgriz:

[font=monotype Corsiva]Mia Bonello

William 'Willow' Bonello

Jose Diablo

Lope Rainerio

Fedele Castro

Giovanni Cordova

Alejandro Emidio

Lothario Malvasi

Sarah Dattaglia

Ricardo Escobar

Raul Morientes

Esperanza Larez

Enrique Martinez

Santino Malvasi

Joaquim Dattaglia

Luisa DeJesus

Kaela DeJesus


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[font=Monotype Corsiva]Retired:

[color=#FF0000][font=Monotype Corsiva]Kristina Pryde

Miguel Marron

Ferdi Lombardi

Honorary: Margarita Cruz


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[font=monotype Corsiva]Remember Meredith Harolds, our Beloved Ember.
Remember Bernard Fokke, the Duke of Corsica.
For Fallen Comrades.


*****

[font=monotype Corsiva]Anyone who can bring the 101st Tracy Lacy, preferably alive, will be awarded ten million credits. She can't seem to decide between her career as a reporter or a Bounty Hunter...she needs some persuasion.

There she is. Have at it, people, I'd like to improve this as much as I can, it's about time I go on a recruiting spree and I want to make it look purty.


101st Faction Status Review - Niezck - 04-06-2008

Couple of things...

First, quite obvious really, "
Anyone who can bring the 66th Fighter Wing Tracy Lacy, preferably alive, will be awarded ten million credits. She can't seem to decide between her career as a reporter or a Bounty Hunter...she needs some persuasion." The post says 101st not 66th.

Second, it's LR not [LR], just things i noticed while scrolling down:)


101st Faction Status Review - McNeo - 04-06-2008

The Shiplist looks good. Weapons list might be a bit vague, but there isn't much room for maneuver outside of Outcast tech. Then again, I dont think anyone would want to swap out Krackens for something like Hellflurries, so that isn't an issue. Civvie shield busters aren't a problem, as they are universal weapons, and they do sync nicely with the Kracken.

I also like how you have put the notable exceptions to the shiplist in there with the RP explaination in short of why you have them.

The only thing I would say you need to add is a list of systems where 66th ships can go, as a list in the style of the TBH post or a nice shiny picture in the shape of the QCRF post. That is the only real thing missing, unless I can't read...

Apart from that, all good:)




101st Faction Status Review - Equinox - 04-06-2008

Looks good to me.

Quote:*Live In truth *Have Faith *Repent Of Sin * Give proof of humility * Love Justice *Be Merciful *Be Sincere *Endure persecution

The Knights of the Order of St. John of Jerusalem, Ancient Terra

*Vive segun la verdad *Ten Fe *Arrepientete de tus pecados *Da prueba de humildad *Ama la justicia *Se Piadoso
*Se sincero *Resiste la persecucion

Los caballeros de la Orden de San Juan de Jerusalem, Tierra Antigua.

Maybe you could use another font for this part as its quite hard to read.


101st Faction Status Review - mjolnir - 04-06-2008

Meh.. if it was up to me I would limit civilian shieldbusters to max Adv. Debils. Since Freelancers use them.. and reserve Imp. ones to Lane Hackers and real civilians only.


101st Faction Status Review - Eppy - 04-06-2008

Hm...I totally forgot the ZoI info, I just sort of assumed it was a give, I'll have to ask Unseelie how she did hers.

Yeah, that bit at the top was copied over from the Hoodlum-era 101st faction status. I thought it was artful so I kept it in. It's been reformatted.

Both of Chris' typos have been corrected.


101st Faction Status Review - sovereign - 04-06-2008

Check the dates of acquisition on the non-native ships: When the Perhilion was acquired, Fantasia was still a ship of the line in BAF.... but that was some 50 years AFTER it's burned out wreck was given to outcasts in exchange for O-49 sweep? wha??? Fix dates, should be fine. Adds something unique to the faction, and let's you fly the pretty Kusari destroyer.


Looks great, nice and pretty (if a little hard to read), and I see no problems other than the funny timeline for the non-Outcast ships.


101st Faction Status Review - Lohingren - 04-06-2008

i personally dont think this is nessecary to be put in

the 101st we see nowadays is not the 101st that we seen 5 months ago.

they have different names different members and a different leader they are by far a completely new faction with a sub faction with the same name as the old


101st Faction Status Review - Dusty Lens - 04-06-2008

' Wrote:i personally dont think this is nessecary to be put in

the 101st we see nowadays is not the 101st that we seen 5 months ago.

they have different names different members and a different leader they are by far a completely new faction with a sub faction with the same name as the old

Aside from a different member roster, what specifically has changed about the 101st that you believe should be addressed here? I have to admit I find this criticism somewhat confusing and vague.


101st Faction Status Review - Lohingren - 04-06-2008

well it wasnt criticism but it has changed almost completely.

101st used to never leave alpha/eta.

they never used to have a defined leader/2nd in command all of them were treated equally when it came to hierarchy

theyre rp has changed significantly since the old one

the only thing that is the same is the subfactions name hell they aint even specifically called 101st anymore but 66th this was in no way a dig but just bringing up a point.

im sure im not the only one who see's it this way. because they are very much a completely different faction

EDIT: please note it has not changed theyre RP quality in anyway and still very much deserve a place here, i just wished to state this little point.