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Sanguine Aurora | Feedback Thread - Auriec - 04-30-2013 Hello, everyone. I'm just starting to get used to writing my own 'stories' and I'd really like to hear some feedback on it. Since yesterday I started testing mixed/3rd person perspective, to get more detail going. How am I doing so far? Link |