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Panem et Circenses, Aurèlie LaBrise's Holojournal feedback - Pinko - 05-31-2013
http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=99583
My first real RP story/biography here, I think. I don't care much aboutt the others if there were. Feel free to criticize, good or bad.
RE: Panem et Circenses, Aurèlie LaBrise's Holojournal feedback - LunaticOnTheGrass - 06-01-2013
I like it.
That's not really criticism, but I'm very interested in seeing more of the story.
RE: Panem et Circenses, Aurèlie LaBrise's Holojournal feedback - Pinko - 06-01-2013
Thanks a lot!
A bit more information is needed, I guess. Some people told me they are confused about the context.
Aurèlie LaBrise is an Unione Corse pilot who resides in Bourbon station, the LaBrise family being the ones who evicted the Junkers out of Bourbon quite a while ago. The point of the story is to trace the path of a young girl which grew up during the Gallic revolution in a family with conflicting interests on both sides of the war, and how she copes with it as she discovers who the Corse truly are.