Kiny0's feedback

[Kiny0]

Hi, all,

I guess I should make a feedback thread as everyone here considering I've just posted my first RP story on the forums. As I said, it's all pretty new to me so do not hesitate to tell me I'm doing something stupidly wrong ! (I accept positive feedback too).

I really don't know what I'm doing here, so any feedback is much appreciated, be it on the style or content of what I write.
I can also obviously answer any questions if you have some, and I'm open to any suggestions.
I'm sure there's a lot of room for improvement.

"Encroachment" - Elicia Gridley's main story

I've got no interactions so far exploring the Omegas, so in-game RP is non-existent at the moment.

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