(07-09-2016, 10:25 AM)xManBG Wrote: Finally a constructive feedback. So bout the lore ye indeed is fast written but i can make changes here and there bout the ported faction only the logo,name and a little bit of the goons attitude is imported .
Just get the lore fixed, and distance the group away from the ported one you brought in, and I think it'll be square enough for practice.
I'm not against people trying new factions. I prefer it. Variety is what keeps a diverse setting like Sirius running, and 'sameyness' will only leave you forgotten. Granted, that's what most people seem to want this faction to become, but I differ. Again, it may be because of my lack of knowledge, but still, it's good to see people expressing their ideas for new factions to interact with the Sirius Geo-political setting.
Like I said though, this is just me. Others will have different opinions about it, as some always do, but that's just what you get in a community like this.
I wish you the best of luck with the faction, and I hope it ends up being something interesting instead of just another bland slate of piracy ported from another game.
EDIT: Also, just a little add-on note, I'm pretty sure the Xenos hate every pirate faction. They're more oppressed citizens, and don't think too highly of pirate factions. So it'd probably be safe to put them down on a lower rep bar.