I would only suggest you one thing. Before you upload your faction info, next time, if you will be making another group/faction OR if you will be posting a RP story or anything RP related, first write a decent ammount of material and then after, use PREVIEW option to code and finish your post.
While this, you will need to bump the thread all time when you will add more material since this is WIP (Work In Progress- add that to thread title) while, uploading already decent material with little things to fix (like small grammar mistakes, coding, font) will make your life easier and community will see already fine version of what you want to represent.
I also see that you're new, don't get me wrong, I'm just giving you some suggestions.
Regards.
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(06-15-2016, 08:11 AM)Projekt Lerdi Wrote: I would only suggest you one thing. Before you upload your faction info, next time, if you will be making another group/faction OR if you will be posting a RP story or anything RP related, first write a decent ammount of material and then after, use PREVIEW option to code and finish your post.
While this, you will need to bump the thread all time when you will add more material since this is WIP (Work In Progress- add that to thread title) while, uploading already decent material with little things to fix (like small grammar mistakes, coding, font) will make your life easier and community will see already fine version of what you want to represent.
I also see that you're new, don't get me wrong, I'm just giving you some suggestions.
Regards.
Hey man don't worry yes i am new and i will listen your advice thank you.
Mmm... another faction that wants to unite the houses. Interessants... be aware of "Rivals", like the Alliance Star Fleet or the Reaper of Sirius (If I remember)
On a more serious note, I see no relation at all between Clear Sky and uniting the colonies and / or Liberty. Why insist on using unimportant things as imports, like the name, Lebedev and the arm patch of the Stalker faction?
I said come in, don't stand there!
EDIT: also, why Clear Sky? It's probably the lamest and most non-Disco compatible faction of them all. Why not the crazy religious Monolith sect or the junkie anarchist Freedom?
Secondary Objective:End the Conflict between the Liberty Factions, if it must be, by force.
Zone of influence:Border world's, Liberty Zone's
Okay so your zone of influence seems a bit weird, since liberty is right at the center of the map, whereas the border worlds (taus, sigmas, omegas) are on, well, the border of the Sirius sector and the two areas have no connection between them. Perhaps you meant the Independent worlds? (Mag/Cortez, Kep/Gal, Hud/Bering and a few others). Having a ZoI in border worlds would mean you would have to set a diplomacy attitude to a dozen more factions (IMG, GMG, GRN, RHA, sair's, CR, SCRA etc.) who operate in those area's.
And your objectives, is this another faction that will be flying around liberty shooting criminals? There's already an unbalance towards the lawful side so another faction probably won't be too appreciated. If you want to end the conflict between Liberty factions, a more interesting approach, than just shooting the pirates, would be trying to stop the prison pipeline system in Texas, and the rest of Liberty as well. I remember back in vanilla, the LPI was rounding up people on Denver and throwing them into Sugarland and Hunstville, simply to make room for the rich people's villas.
Something like: "Pirates, stop shooting people and being dicks, nobody likes you for it; Law-enforcers/Corps: Don't treat them like shit, give them some respect and they won't fight". Trying to fix both sides attitude, instead of just killing off one side. As for the Hellfire Legion, I don't know as much about them, since they aren't a vanilla faction, but I would suggest a similar attitude, of trying to stop the fighting and get people to talk out their differences.
Also, you haven't mentioned a specific diplomacy for the Lane Hackers, which you might want to include, since they are fairly close with the Rogues and Outcasts, so fighting them will probably set you against the Hackers too.
Thats about all I can think to mention now,
Good Luck running this faction, and i'll see you around liberty