Judgement - Feedback

[Toaster]

Link to the story.

This is a story for a new character I came up with as I tossed and turned in bed at 2am last night, unable to sleep. It's a work in progress and will likely not be any kind of literary masterpiece, but I hope anyone curious enough to read through it will find some enjoyment.

If you have any feedback or criticism, feel free to post it here - as long as it's in a friendly and constructive manner.

Cheers.

[Black.Cat]

Well, the first that i can say, there is no pictures, only text so that makes reading boring.

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