It was an horror story for me it grabed my thoughts from the first line and started to imagine what i was reading.And to be onest i belived it...i got scared...even had a nightmare.The part when dead people ships appeard it spooked me because in 2008 on Disco ive experienced something similar....the bounty hunter wreck in Alpha was bearing my name for a brief moment.
' Wrote:Hot damn. You gave me shivers. Can I sleep with you, please?
Basically what Corsair said.
It's been a long time since anything gave me the shivers. That never happens anymore... but you did it. Amazing work, and PLEASE have more scary dreams!
I read this twice before posting.
The entire read I was totally .___.
Once I finished the second time, I became o.o
I have a great imagination, it is good for art and poetry and such, but for stories?
It becomes rape, and I both enjoyed and did not enjoy this.
I've played freelancer for as long as I can remember freelancer existing, and it just made me think of it.
Very nicely written, great hook, and a conclusive ending.
Must say I've never read a better or shorter story that I actually enjoyed this much.