An unexpected stop is now finished, I hope everyone liked the story, some minor unexplained details were explained in the story. It'll also be leverage for future RP.
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Your writing is pretty decent, but please please PLEASE write in something other than alternating neon green and red. Those colors are to legible text what I was to forum moderation.
I have taken note of John's comment, that being said I don't actually have another unique sort of font to type up the story with and I'd hate for it just to be the dull typical font. So after this thread and for future threads I'll likely update it.