Mister Carver, while I respect the fact that you fought for the Bretonians against the Gallic threat, there are simply too many errors and holes in your application. In addition, you have not submitted a completed questionnaire although there has been ample time for you to do so. Furthermore, parts of your application just do not make sense grammatically.
Honestly Mister Carver, I recommend that you return to Bretonian space and fight for your lost home...that's what I would do.
Your application for enlistment with the First Fleet is hereby DENIED