Since I decided to start a Diary for my currently only major character, I will start one of these.
I am grateful for any Feedback I can get on my character, may it be ingame or on the Forum.
Also please tell me if the colour I am using is acceptable to read.
The dark green is a little hard to make out on a phone display, generally darker colours tend to become obscure with a black background. I believe it shouldn't be too bad on a computer though.
It's not impossible to read or overly difficult, so perhaps one tick up into a brighter hue might be beneficial. While maintaing your colour scheme of course.
"Knowing Humanity - We will be duty, bloody and unavoidable."
I find the idea original, and especially that bring RP in your main character. Now about the form, the color is in the theme (normal it's Unioners). However i join Krsnik about the "dark" of the color. Maybe on phone it's a little difficult to read, but on PC it's perfect.
Well i can tell many things about the story ( in the literally way) but i'll not write here ( sorry i'm cureently contaminate by my literally exams) . But continue!
That'll be interesting if we can do that with my character too ( i hope you know what i mean ) but we will see that near the Freeport......
Thanks you two for the feedback. Due to it I adjusted the colour scheme a bit, it should now be easier to read for peole using a mobile device or at least it is my hope that it will be easier.
Also added a link to the original Biography to the first post.