It's not good, it's weirdly portioned, and a horrible colour scheme, and let's NOT talk about the border.
What I had in mind...
A Gallic Battleship shadow being in the background ( I found the background on my sig on Moddb in the images section )
And then Emily - Or the actress I use for Emily ( Nicki Clyne )
With the main colour scheme being a purple/Violet colour, and having somehow the symbols of Liberty and Bretonia incorporated - Here is where I lose my creativity, maybe merging the colours somehow, have them fade out? I don't know. Get creative?
I'll be doing this some in-game credits if anyone does this kind of things anymore.
P.S. If this is in the wrong section for the forums, I'm sorry !!