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Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Neonzumi - 07-02-2017

Initial comment: My old feedback thread is a complete mess. And as I am working on writing a few story threads to summarize the development of my major characters up until now, I've decided to make a new fresh one which will be updated as often as possible for me.

Feel free to leave feedback for interactions or so on which are not tied to characters listed bellow as well. It will take me a while to finish up on everything.


Jax Rogers

Affiliation History: Victim of Circumstance Smuggler, Mercenary, Chief of Liberty Police, The Bounty Hunters Guild
Current Affiliation: Forlorn Hope
Important Stories: One Hell of a Ride (Biography, WIP)
Character Image(s): Monkey Suit, Casual Clothes


Ivy Noire


Affiliation History: Liberty Security Force Reserve Research Group, The Core
Current Affiliation: Auxesia
Important Stories: Sentient
Character Image(s): Noire


Theo Angelopoulos


Affiliation History: N/A
Current Affiliation: The Custodi
Important Stories: N/A (SoonTM)
Character Image(s): (Couldn't find the original so here's the T-Bar)


Raku Yagami

Affiliation History: Thunderbolt Trading Company
Current Affiliation: Interspace Commerce
Important Stories: N/A
Character Image(s) (And here I am with the T-Bar again)


Kristian Levan


Affiliation History: West Point Military Academy Cadet
Current Affiliation: Battlegroup Harmony
Important Stories: Personnel Database Entry (Not a story but, eh), Good personnel are hard to come by
Character Image(s): Levan


Lars Dennis


Affiliation History: Daumann Heavy Construction
Current Affiliation: Red Hessians Army
Important Stories: Contamination (Couple o' Contributions)
Character Images: Blue and Green Drache


Shana Nesho'en

Affiliation History: The Blood Dragons
Current Affiliation: The Nesho'en Clan
Important Stories: Kyojin no Yūki (Nesho'en Related), Quote on quote, Strategist (RIP)
Character Images: Proud Owner of a Male Harem ; And the RL Version I guess


Andrew "Frostbite" Frost

Affiliation History: Freelancer Escort, Omicron Supply Industries, Arcani
Current Affiliation: The Core
Important Stories: N/A (SoonTM)
Charater Image(s): Frostbite, Andrew Frost (Weeaboo Extraordinare, dw looking for a RL equivalent)




RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Techpriest - 07-02-2017

I miss your LPI- Chief boss. Sad


RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Traxit - 07-02-2017

your right clicking quality has gone down since 6 months after your enrollment into Xtreme Trading Faction, pls fix.


RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Neonzumi - 07-02-2017

(07-02-2017, 04:47 PM)Traxit Wrote: your right clicking quality has gone down since 6 months after your enrollment into Xtreme Trading Faction, pls fix.

I am in progress of removing 6 months worth of rust from my right click. The quality of my Xtreme Trading will go up within the next month or so. Keepo


RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Neonzumi - 08-11-2017

Added Shana as I'll be using her actively again.
Cleaned some stuff up and fixed a few typos.



RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Neonzumi - 08-27-2017

Added some links, fixed a few.
Shameless bump. Would appreciate feedback on this trash my dudes.



RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Shelco - 08-27-2017

You could be doing way more RP since you obviously have the skills for it. ^-^



RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Neonzumi - 08-27-2017

(08-27-2017, 10:33 PM)Shelco Wrote:
You could be doing way more RP since you obviously have the skills for it. ^-^

I have a hard time finding people to RP with, and rarely get pumped to write posts for my on going stories sadly. Appreciated fam.


RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Kanzler Niemann - 08-27-2017

I'm free for tha arpee


RE: Neon's RP Feedback Thread (Right Click to Apply Roleplay) - Neonzumi - 08-27-2017

(08-27-2017, 10:40 PM)Wasserdrache Wrote: I'm free for tha arpee

Aren't I a bit too 2 gae 4 u? (^: