Difference between revisions of "Talk:Sol Coalition"
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Don't take offense, ok? Just trying to help you here mate. | Don't take offense, ok? Just trying to help you here mate. | ||
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| + | :You'll also need to check what history we are using. The Coalition is not dead in Discovery. Read the [http://www.discoverygc.com forums] for more information on the Coalition. Search for SCRA. [[User:Chovynz|Chovynz]] 12:35, 18 September 2008 (GMT) | ||
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Good to see a new face editing wiki Arendyr. But could you read through what you write before saving the page? I mean there were a lot of spelling errors. And sometimes it was just hard trying to follow your train of thought. You might consider using shorter sentences. Also what comes a great help to me also is the Firefox 3 with it's automatic spell checker. Just make sure you download the English version of the installation package.
I corrected (not to perfect state) the first two paragraphs and then decided just to discuss it out. I think this article needs remaking. You have made new links to War of Sol and that is good. Most of the article content could be transferred there, since you describe how the war proceeds.
Don't take offense, ok? Just trying to help you here mate. --Looqas 12:23, 18 September 2008 (GMT)
